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Luma - M&L:PiT


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Luma - M&L:PiT
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#1
05-22-2008, 01:41 PM
This is a quite old sprite of mine, but I decided to post it anyways.
[Image: Luma___Mario_and_Luigi_2_by_LeonardoDabooski.gif]
Comments and Constructive criticism please.
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#2
05-22-2008, 01:51 PM
Wow, it looks pretty good, except for the eye around the Red Luma.. seems kind of weird. Otherwise good job, make a Hungry Luma or something. Big Grin
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#3
05-22-2008, 01:52 PM
Boo Wrote:Wow, it looks pretty good, except for the eye around the Red Luma.. seems kind of weird. Otherwise good job, make a Hungry Luma or something. Big Grin
Yes I noticed the eyes in the red Luma too, and I might make Hungry Luma later.
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#4
05-22-2008, 01:58 PM
Pretty cool. Are you going to work on it more?
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05-22-2008, 02:00 PM
Ragnarök Wrote:Pretty cool. Are you going to work on it more?
If people find something for me to add or fix in it.
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#6
05-22-2008, 02:06 PM
Cute ^^

It's some stars of Super Mario Galaxie? No?
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#7
05-22-2008, 02:09 PM
Skidd Wrote:
Ragnarök Wrote:Pretty cool. Are you going to work on it more?
If people find something for me to add or fix in it.
Maybe an idle animation?
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05-22-2008, 04:19 PM
Cute. I agree with Ragnarok.
An Idle would seem fine.
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#9
05-22-2008, 07:25 PM
Slightly more contrast and more shades could make it look better.

And the red Luma isn't as gawdsome as the the others.
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