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[Baegal]

Yeah, I've kinda done those thumbnails in my head, so you can say I'm not the best planner :V
I've actually come across this problem a lot, but have been too lazy to fix it. I'll be doing that from now on, and, time permitting, will fix the others. Thanks!

Besides the actual speech bubbles, does what's in the speech bubbles make sense and flow normally? I feel like sometimes the words and flow don't seem to match up.

[Chutzpar]

They seem fine to me!

Have you tried reading them aloud? It might make it easier to understand how well the speech flows that way.
I dunno, I'm kind of a noob to sequential art x:

[Baegal]

Have 2 more (I won't even say it's back because we all saw how that went.)