I'm a Sweet Transvestite [WIP]

[EdpR]

Hi guys, been a long time
I know you can help me out

[Gors]

the hand grabbing the legs should be on his/her knee or else it wouldn't balance out well.



also EDPRPRPRRRRRRRRR

[Koopaul]

Awesome people should start making pixelarts for strange musicals. Who's going to do Little Shop of Horrors?

Also the arm wrapping around his/her back could be bent a little more. Their shoulders are creepy wide, but maybe it's okay for Rocky but it looks weird on Frank.

[EdpR]

They look much better, thank you gorsal and koopaul


I kinda missed TSR

[Chutzpar]

I'd be inclined to move Rocky's other arm, too; since most of it's covered it's a little hard to read how it's positioned, so it looks kinda nubby. Try moving his upper arm inwards towards his torso so you can see part of the elbow in the gap between him and Frank, maybe?

Also maybe broaden Franks shoulders and make his calves a bit thicker? I almost don't want to say this because I kind of love how spindly you've made the legs look, but that's too feminine, so he doesn't look like a transvestite so much as a skinny woman x:

I really like this though! Finish iiiiiit.

[Rakia]

I think make the left arm (the one that is more out of sight) bend at the elbow so it's seen a bit more.
Thats what i think.
Great though!

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

Sorry I haven't replied to this thread earlier, I've been on TSR but not for doing any long, contsructive posts. Anyway now I have the time to do it:
First off balance and anatomy don't seem plausible. EDIT:

the rock is only one possibility, i think you could do with trying out other things

[Chutzpar]

Chris um
I think maybe you are unfamiliar with the characters
the character that the blonde guy's holding isn't actually a woman, but you've made him look like one :V

He's meant to be in drag, see:

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

i'm unfamiliar with the characters, but from the title of the topic i guessed the woman was in fact a man, but i still gave him breasts. i guess i was distracted, thanks for pointing that out!

[EdpR]

Thanks guys for the help, specially chris.
I made a manlier Frank