Practicing LSDJ

[EF-WHY-EL]

I've recently started trying to learn more about LSDJ and I managed to construct another tune starting from the end of last week.

Crit is welcome as always.
I tried pretty hard on this one.

http://www.8bc.org/music/KidCalcium/BITC...28LSDJ%29/

[Desert Cat]

I felt the beginning jingle was a little rough but it quickly became really freakin' cool. Nice job!!

[EF-WHY-EL]

haha thanks!
Yeah I was kind of unsure about having that jingle at the beginning. I think it's kind of misguiding... I dunno if that's a good or bad thing heheh

[stache]

I listened to this, and it was really tight, good job bro