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Looking for some input on this.
#16
i'd like to point out knowing you've made a mistake and knowing how to solve a mistake are two different things, and i think you created a thread for the latter.
i think the stubble could be less saturated and not as dark, because it starts to blend with the suit. i actually thought it was a shadow at first!
i think the suit could also benefit from more contrast.
anyway, looking forward to the next update!
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#17
The collar area of the suit still makes no sense. Right now, it looks as if he were wearing a turtleneck sweater and the shirt's collar were popping out from the neck.
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#18
I have to say though, it's a massive improvement on the first.
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