Hooray my first upload!!! Enjoy
Did I forget somethin?
Did I forget somethin?
Super Toad Kart
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Hooray my first upload!!! Enjoy
Did I forget somethin?
06-09-2011, 11:30 PM
Why yes, you did forget something. This is the wrong section completely. Moved.
06-09-2011, 11:30 PM
(This post was last modified: 06-09-2011, 11:31 PM by edsterisawesome.)
Congratulations on your upload!... but this is the Models Resource, 3D stuff. Yours should go in the Spriter's Resource.
Aww. Ninja'd by Shadow.
06-09-2011, 11:40 PM
(06-09-2011, 11:30 PM)edsterisawesome Wrote: Yours should go in the Spriter's Resource. No, it really shouldn't. You can keep it. In all seriousness though, let me give some constructive crit rather than just being a jerk. -Toad is obviously lifted out of something else, not custom made. If you don't want the styles to clash you should make it all from custom. -Your kart is hard to read. The wing and Toad really clash with the rest because they have a black outline, the rest does not. -Everything custom made has literally no animation to it. Sure you have that wing flap, but are you honestly telling me you made that wing? -The fire effect for the speed boost looks more like he's pooping out mustard than boosting. What I'd try first is to make a Toad and Wing all on your own, then try to animate the Kart, at LEAST make the wheels look like they move. Thanked by: Garamonde, Davy Jones, qwizzy555
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