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Its hard to say much at an early stage, but there are some jagged outlines.
Namely on the bill.
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the little back... part there looks too small vertically like it got squashed or something but only that part
make it taller
It's a good start..Viper pointed out the main thing that came to my mind.
I almost want to say I'm seeing these faint radiating lines in it..maybe a part of the gradient you used?
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The back of the hat has a straight diagonal line and it's pretty distracting. Try to smooth it out. The brim really needs some reshaping too. I think it's at the wrong angle, and it doesn't look even throughout.