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i edited GSGal a little if you don't mind, cbl

1-I gave her hip bones. the way you made her legs before was a little odd.
2-Simplified the pockets in the sweater to improve readability.
3-I changed her nose, as the original pixel placement fused with the eye, making a single pixel cluster.
4-Gave more volume to the pigtails. The older one was too straight imo.

hope you like it, I really enjoy this character c:
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Oh yes that is so much better.
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well, to be honest I'm not sure what I'm getting at myself. I just thought that the color of the ponytails doesn't match with her hair. I just thought that maybe her ponytails have too much light color on them?
But maybe it's just my computer Sick
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I believe the dark part is a hat.
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eheh... it's not a hat. it's her hair.

i colored the pigtails lighter because i dislike using inlines in this style...

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is this better?

EDIT: dfgdfs also thanks gors, your edit is fantastic and perfect
TAKE 2
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i re-added the shadow from her sweatshirt, and messed with the shape of her legs a bit, but... i was unsure on the position of her pigtail. it seemed kind of like it was sticking out too far now, so i pulled it in a pixel.

which one looks best to you guys?
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I like the second one best
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I actually prefer it farther away.
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say hi to Zed.

Maybe he has a grudge because your pies gave him food poisoning.
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(07-08-2012, 11:33 PM)Iceman404 Wrote: Maybe he has a grudge because your pies gave him food poisoning.
Please, please, please make it this.
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or you could say you gave him a blueberry filled pie



and he hates blueberries
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i took some enemies from a couple classic beat 'em ups and adapted them...

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the guys on the left are galsia and donovan from streets of rage 2/3, and the little white robot on the right is a mouser from teenage mutant ninja turtles.

i'll also leave this here...

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I don't know about him moving out of place.. (i mean sure you probably need to do it to make the attack but it would make him move a step forward everytime he does that
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that looks smooth, but not powerful. Make the gaps between the frames bigger.
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