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The anatomy is a bit wonky. His arms are different lengths, and there are a lot of straight lines. Also his face looks a little deflated.
The selout is also somewhat overdone and unnecessary.
06-25-2012, 01:03 PM
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I took the liberty of recoloring your sprite to show how you should shade it
i didn't change any of the anatomy, but it's wonky as hell
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06-25-2012, 01:27 PM
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You gotta love snivy.
hey. cut out with the spamming. You've posted in several threads without having any content. I'll give you a small warning; do this again and I shall increase it.
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yeah i cheated by having black as the background color...
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(06-25-2012, 03:03 PM)Lexou Duck Wrote: -image-
yeah i cheated by having black as the background color...
That's not cheating. That's how many companies worked around the 3 color limit, at the cost of a background however. You made a sprite suitable for a black BG, that's what it is. It's just not friendly towards different BGs.
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Thanx for the feedback... based on them i changed a lot my megaman...
I'm not satisfied with the shading, and the face too (low contrast on pallete to do something better, but rules are rules)...if someone would like to improve, thats would be great!
Hope you like....C+C are welcome.
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06-27-2012, 09:09 AM
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His Right Leg (our left) is shaded incorrectly. The shadow should be to the left, not the right. Also, why does the underwear(?) part have a shine, and no other parts (other than the ear and the hands) have a shine?
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Wario's Woods! Have it on the SNES and I loved it back in the days. Here's some love for the monsters.
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(06-29-2012, 10:13 AM)NICKtendo DS Wrote:
Wario's Woods! Have it on the SNES and I loved it back in the days. Here's some love for the monsters.
Oh man I love you so hard for that.
Also uhh, I'm sorry but I probably won't get to make anything for this before the month's over... I wanted to but I've just got other things to take care of that I feel are of higher priority. Don't worry though I'll start spriting again sometime.
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(06-29-2012, 10:41 AM)Mighty Jetters Wrote: (06-29-2012, 10:13 AM)NICKtendo DS Wrote:
Wario's Woods! Have it on the SNES and I loved it back in the days. Here's some love for the monsters.
Oh man I love you so hard for that.
Also uhh, I'm sorry but I probably won't get to make anything for this before the month's over... I wanted to but I've just got other things to take care of that I feel are of higher priority. Don't worry though I'll start spriting again sometime.
tell me wich one you wanted to make, and i'll make it for you.
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I got a bit carried away with this one. I'm not 100% happy with it, but I figured I'd put it up here.
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06-30-2012, 12:03 AM
(This post was last modified: 06-30-2012, 12:24 AM by Gaia.)
This be a work in progress.
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It really could use more work, but I'm done fussing with it. If I had a black
to work with, It would have been a lot easier. Oh well.
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