Shadow Kami's Literature.

[Kami]

I never thought I'd write poetry

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Prophecy(An epic poem)

The user of black flame,
Will bring great shame,
To angels and demons,
With the use of great spells.

Three worlds merge to one,
Leaving all but none.
Three kingdoms fall,
To something so small.
One kingdom rises out of the ashes,
To bring the world from slashes.

The one to bring the world from death,
Thy name is death.

To bring order,
As if Mortar.
To free the the world from sin,
from thy kin.

Much blood will be shed in a war,
But what its for,
Theres more.
Mortals without justification,
Leave destruction in their wake without discrimination.

With the wolf of black and the wolf of white,
The future looks bright.

The one to bring the world from death,
Thy name is death.

Tis the worlds finest hour,
The demons will show their true power.
Satan will launch a campaign,
For mortals, it will bring great pain.
To swallow Aieshia for his master Wlan,
To Rule over all he can.

Though They try,
Mortals will just die.

Two of the Worlds merge,
Leaving one to purge.
The Last world left,
Is Hieshou, a world without.

The one to bring the world from death,
Tis thy name death.

Succeeder to the throne of death,
Not even afraid of dragon's breath.

With black & white wings, and the 30 tailed wolf's tail,
Marked by light and dark, his enemies will fail.
The one to bring the world from death,
Thy name is death.

The many elements are all minior,
for he is finer.

The one to bring the world from death,
Thy name is death.

A little back story on this piece of literature:
I had a dream a while ago, this was in a certain recurring dream.
I wrote it down when I woke up and coded it(Made is so others weren't able to read it), I just recently unearthed it and decoded it, and decoding it took longer than I thought it should.

Theres alot more to it, so I'm going to update it as I remember things.

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Seems like you try to make thingy rhyme in the most basic rhyme pattern ever (AABB all over) yet sometimes there's no rhyme at all. Also, you don't pay any attention at all to syllable counts or measures. You have lines this long next to lines that short. This results in a lack of rhythm. Furthermore, your stanzas all have different length.
The thing with poetry is that it usually follows strict form. There must be patterns everywhere, everything is planned with care for detail.
I've never been good at these things myself so that's about all I can say.