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[Image: mockup_wip.png]

No limits, WIP.
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... I don't really understand what I'm looking at?
Tsunami Bomb - The Simple Truth
We could run away
Leave behind anything paper
Not knowing where we're going to stay
When there's no Mondays

You're part of me, it's so easy to see the simple truth
When I'm in your arms, I feel safe from harm and sorrow too
You're part of me, it's so easy to see the simple truth
But most of all, nothing couldn't be solved when I'm with you
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It looks like some sort of rock....crab....thing.
Doofenshmirtz: This is a little bit awkward but have you seen my escape jet keys? (Perry nods) What, you have? Well that's great! So where are they? (Perry looks away) You won't tell me? Is this because you don't speak or are you just being a jerk?
~Phineas and Ferb, "One Good Scare Ought to Do It!" (2008)
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(12-11-2008, 10:21 AM)Dazz Wrote: ... I don't really understand what I'm looking at?

In-Battle scene against a rock scorpion emerging from the ground.
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#5
The details and colors are always great, you never fail there.

But it just isn't looking like a scorpion. For one it doesn't look like it has an exoskeleton but muscles and flesh. Try making the joints separated instead of connected like skin.

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(12-11-2008, 11:31 AM)koopaul Wrote: The details and colors are always great, you never fail there.

But it just isn't looking like a scorpion. For one it doesn't look like it has an exoskeleton but muscles and flesh. Try making the joints separated instead of connected like skin.

If I wanted just an ordinary scorpion I would have have given it an exoskeleton.

I appreciate the C+C though.
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#7
Maybe you should finish it a tad more so it can be properly critted.
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