First try at the style

[BobbyLala]

my first try at pokemon g/s/c style
is it ok?
it's an egg, fried egg & omelette

mock up

[GaryCXJk]

The regular egg has an irregular shape. Shading is fine though, and that's basically it.

The fried egg has two sharp edges, it doesn't look like a natural shape. Likewise for the omelette, although I think the problem here is that it's too smooth. Both have a too regular shape.

[Gors]

I think that the shape you used for the fried would suit the omelette better, and vice versa.