King Dedede

[Neslug]

Looks pillowshaded, the blue and brown (hammer) need to be more vivid.

[Teddy The Elite]

Me thinks the main problem of the sprite is the fact that the outlines inside the sprite are sttill as black. I'm not seeing that much in the other sprites. :V

^This hard.

[red reaper]

i see what everyone means ill take another crack at it in a bit

edits;

is this any better if not some else give it a try

[ectoBiologist]

Heh, it seems like everytime I try an edit someone else gets there faster and does it better than I do. The shading is great, but the linework still seems like a sketch. It needs to be a little bit smoother. Out of all the chars in brawl, DeDeDe is one of the cartooniest. He looks rougher than both DK and Bowser. I can't put my finger on all the problems, but I know one of them is the hammer. Something just bugs me about it.

[red reaper]

Heh, it seems like everytime I try an edit someone else gets there faster and does it better than I do. The shading is great, but the linework still seems like a sketch. It needs to be a little bit smoother. Out of all the chars in brawl, DeDeDe is one of the cartooniest. He looks rougher than both DK and Bowser. I can't put my finger on all the problems, but I know one of them is the hammer. Something just bugs me about it.

its too small

[Phantom Killah]

It looks way too dirty

[red reaper]

It looks way too dirty

i see what you mean he is harder than he looks

[ectoBiologist]

Amen.
I figured it'd be one of the easiest ones. D;

[red reaper]

i gave it another try hows it look now

[Phantom Killah]

Not entirely happy with what I have so far, but I think this is closer to what we're going for

[red reaper]

Not entirely happy with what I have so far, but I think this is closer to what we're going for

looks good but the mouth looks kinda ridged

[Phantom Killah]

yeah, the mouth and hat are pretty bad, and it needs general work everywhere

[red reaper]

i don't know why but he seems impossible to get right

[Phantom Killah]

fixed up the mouth

[red reaper]

fixed up the mouth

nice but there's one pixel that needs darken up on his mouth cause it looks like a tooth