Doodles and Finished Pieces

[Adam]

@baboy: I feel like the torso isn't nearly wide enough. It looks a bit disproportionate.

I also feel like the arm looks less muscular than it does more a cluster of twisted shapes. Overall, it's good, though. The legs are especially nice.

[LeleleleMAXIMUM]

the torso is like that because he's leaning. try it.
and thanks


this came out a bit too thin

[LeleleleMAXIMUM]

outline or no outline
how do i teeth?

[Maxpphire]

I like the outline one better

[LeleleleMAXIMUM]

man. and i liked the no outline.

sorry for the doodlefest. i'm
well
bored

[ThePortalGuru]

man. and i liked the no outline.

sorry for the doodlefest. i'm
well
bored

Clever subtle sexual joke.

[DadNier]

very plain and ordinary super-robot based doodle
this probably could've come out of a 60s or 70s anime

[Devicho]

Kupopo.

[Ashura]

1 am doodle. gotta head off to bed soon

[Ashura]

big image warning

Spoiler

Here is a small preview on my next project. I am planning on drawing ten arcana heart characters:
- Aino (sketch done)
- Dorothy (sketch done)
- Catherine (lineart done)
- Fiona (lineart done)
- Angelia (lineart done)
- Petra (lineart done)
- Lilica (sketch done)
- Saki (lineart done)
- Zenor (sketch done)
- Lieselotte (sketch done)

Does my "original" style look good on them? Or should I try to stick as close to the game's actual anime style? I wanna make sure that people will like them before I spend 10+ hours on coloring them.

[Maxpphire]

they look fine as they are style wise

[Chutzpar]

There is some WEIRD STUFF happening with lineweight, there. The lines on the guns and face look way too light on the girl on the right
that or the other lines are too heavy, take your pick!

I guess it's too late now since you're near enough done, but the pose on Petra is looking really static. Like, she looks more like she's bent down to tie her shoe or something rather than looking like she's aiming a gun or ready for action or anything.

(What on earth is Donut Cannon? x: )

[Ashura]

There is some WEIRD STUFF happening with lineweight, there. The lines on the guns and face look way too light on the girl on the right
that or the other lines are too heavy, take your pick!

I guess it's too late now since you're near enough done, but the pose on Petra is looking really static. Like, she looks more like she's bent down to tie her shoe or something rather than looking like she's aiming a gun or ready for action or anything.

(What on earth is Donut Cannon? x: )

Donut Cannon is the best name ever little missy, he's my best friend

I can redo the linework. I'll thicken the lines on her face/guns. Thanks for the crit!

[Drinks]

Party time

[LeleleleMAXIMUM]

third pass over the sketch
there's gotta be a ton of anatomical fuckups buuuuuuuuuuuuuuut i could always use the "style" excuse!!

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