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#16
much better nice animation.
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#17
[Image: 2eklmq9.png] [Image: 2u9l74j.gif] This might need another frame.
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#18
The arms are fine the legs us to crazy there all over the place try to fix that
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#19
It needed another frame. [Image: alomf7.gif] [Image: 2445c0o.png]
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#20
irck.

again, you need to remove the gray AA because it looks bad. His hand giving peace doesn't look like anything I've ever seen in my entire life, and the walking animation sucks. The legs are jumpy and blocky, and to top it all it doesn't loop properly. The arm looks kinda fine, but you should keep its thickness constant. You should rotate the body a bit when walking. Also, judging by the sheet, the jump animation might not be good.

You need to put some fixed points when animating. For example, Luigi's head should be fixed in the X-axis (it shouldn't slide horizontally) while moving in Y-axis (going up and down).
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#21
Sorry for not posting in a while, so here's a MEGA UPDATE. [Image: 23qyusp.png] Edit: The Mugshots are to be fixed.
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#22
Lah dee dah waiting for a post here
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#23
The big mugs, the walking animations and the "Luigi" writing need more work. The last frame for the peace animation needs correcting too: the shoulder is too low. I suggest you take the AA off, but leave it on if you like. The bottom tileset lacks contrast. The white patch on the hat seem too big imo. i actually prefer the smaller sprites but do carry on!
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(07-06-2009, 06:57 AM)Chris2Balls Wrote: The big mugs, the walking animations and the "Luigi" writing need more work. The last frame for the peace animation needs correcting too: the shoulder is too low. I suggest you take the AA off, but leave it on if you like. The bottom tileset lacks contrast. The white patch on the hat seem too big imo. i actually prefer the smaller sprites but do carry on!
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#25
You know what really disturb's me. You see the mega-shroom (or mushroom, whatever you guys call it)? The white around the eyes seem connected to each other. I've never seen that in the game, so i think you should consider fixing it.
But other than that, it's SUPER-SPECIAL-AWESOME Smile
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(07-06-2009, 04:17 PM)Silverhedge Wrote: You know what really disturb's me. You see the mega-shroom (or mushroom, whatever you guys call it)? The white around the eyes seem connected to each other. I've never seen that in the game, so i think you should consider fixing it.
But other than that, it's SUPER-SPECIAL-AWESOME Smile
Look closer.
Thats not the whites of the mushroom's eyes Tongue. Its just the coloring of its face.
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#27
*Bump* How do you like my Bowser, people?
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#28
Bowser's head seems a bit odd to me, though the body is fine.

Also what Gorsal said get rid of the Grey AA, it sticks out pretty easily in your background I can notice it

otherwise, pretty decent far as I can see.
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