Mabelma's Thread of Stuff (Art)

[Mabelma]

Check it out guys, my first ever graffiti. Any comments are greatly appreciated. Hope you like it. I don't really like the can but it's a start. Tell me what you think about the tag.Any expert graffito care to share some advice? http://i451.photobucket.com/albums/qq234...affiti.jpg

[Dark Ultima]

Its very simple but looks nice and fits the style somewhat.

I'm not a graffiti style person myself.

[Mabelma]

Thanks for the post. It's my first one so I feel proud of it. I'm going to keep praciting and become better at it and move on to doing it on walls. Look forward to some new stuff like anatomy stuff and some other nice stuff I hope.

[Mabelma]

Would you wear a shirt like this?

If yes why? If no how could I improve it? Thanks in advance. The more people that tell me what they think the better. I'm looking to making a shirt out of it but I want to know what the public thinks.

[Mabelma]

I messed around with the bird and design and stuff hope you like and post something.

If yes why? If no how could I improve it? Thanks in advance. The more people that tell me what they think the better. I'm looking to making a shirt out of it but I want to know what the public thinks.

[Mabelma]

Hey guys I just wanted to show you the latest version of the shirt:
Hope you like and comment on it if you want.

[Sengir]

Is he farting music?

[Mabelma]

No, he leaves a trail of music when he flies.

[Baegal]

i dont really like the red, and it seemed to blend in, but a darker or lighter blue than the shirt color I thought looked better. And since the BG is blue, you could have it shade into a light blue or purple rather than black.

[Sengir]

Then have two streams fly from his wings, not ass. it would look better

[Mabelma]

i dont really like the red, and it seemed to blend in, but a darker or lighter blue than the shirt color I thought looked better. And since the BG is blue, you could have it shade into a light blue or purple rather than black.

I though red was good cause it popped out in the shirt but I may change it. Making the clouds shade to purple is a nice idea. I'll try it our.

Then have two streams fly from his wings, not ass. it would look better

Oh ok no problem streams from wing coming right up.

[Mabelma]

Here's the newest version of the shirt. Hope you like.

[Sengir]

Better, though i was imagining two separate streams from each wing merging together.

[Mabelma]

I don't really know how to do that. Could you show me an example?

[Baegal]

i think Norsk meant something like this