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08-10-2009, 07:40 PM
(This post was last modified: 08-10-2009, 07:41 PM by JosephSeraph.)
I am in a mugshot frenzy, so i would like some C+C on my mugshots... Could you give, please? I am loving these. That's the problem! I want to get better, i CAN'T get sactisfied (and creativeless) right?
BTW they are larger than needed. I will put them on 48x48 squares... :p
Sorry for my mistakes on english, people..... I am Brazilian, and to worsen that... i learnt english playing Final Fantasy and asking my mother.
EDIT: Now, 4 years have passed, and I`m an english teacher.
the first woman's neck looks very long, and her eyes look very small. She has pretty big shoulders, too.
the second one looks better but his (?) right shoulder is too long and straight, it almost looks broken. I'd remove those dots below his eye too.
the girl with khaki shirt looks cross-eyed (? It's very weird right now). Increase contrast on her shirt. Also, don't use the same template for different people, it'll look lazy.