mario fangame project

[pretendo_1990]

hi guys im thinking of making a mario fangame called super mario dreamland but right now im doing the sprites and the story and other stuff but so far so good this is a screenshot without mario and the hud and the enemies what do you guys think so far and what looks good and what needs to be fixed this is the grassland plains stage

[Alpha Six]

Not a project.

Moved to Fangames.

It looks pretty bad right now.

[Father Christmas]

Ho ho ho! Comrade Seis above me only means the best in his post!

The graphics could use some serious overhaul. The pipes aren't too bad, but the rest of the graphics suffer from shading issues and overall 'eh' style. I suggest posting the WIP tileset in the Sprite Discussion forum to see if we can help you improve it, lad!

I'd also like to point out that this is more a mockup than an actual screen. Show us proof you're making an actual game, otherwise, all we have to go by is a few tiles put together. Overall, it needs work.

[Teddy The Elite]

Santa always gives the best advice.