The Vic and the Viper

[Cobalt Blue]

did this one a while ago. des already pointed that limbs are rather stickyish and should be a bit more curved.

what do you think?

[Gollum]

The waist and loin on the first character should be more pronounced.
People that skinny usually have large hips from what I've observed.

The wing on the Gradius's right arm (his right) looks off compared to that of his left.
The line art on that portion is also to jagged.

Nice style.