[WEBSITE] Mabelma's Portfolio, Looking for Crits

[Mabelma]

Yeah I know he's right. When did you become a mod Tyvon? That's awesome. I'll forget about the website for a few months cause Metaru is right. My portfolio is full of crap, I need to make actual art before I run a website.

[Vipershark]

way to uh...
"submit" there

[Mabelma]

Don't really get what you're saying.

[Vipershark]

You just sort of gave in there.

Even though the others were technically right, it's sort of like

"hey guys check this out"
"I don't like it"
"You're right I'm a failure at life I won't attempt this ever again."

[Mabelma]

It wasn't really his post that made me give in, what really made my give in was watching other portfolios and noticing that the only thing I really had to offer to future employers were mediocre vectors and most of the actual good things lacked the woow factor. That doesn't mean I will give up art instead it means that I must keep on drawing, I must keep going in on and try ten times harder and keep on making my own style. I'm currently finishing some art books by Andrew Loomis and then I will most likely try the new knowledge into some new piece before I start working on the portfolio again. I'm thinking of doing what Kosheh( I think it was him) did about drawing a new thing everyday on posting it here for critic and then apply the critics/advice to the drawing on the next day but I don't really know if I should do it yet since I have no actual idea of anatomy or proportion.

[Cobalt Blue]

it helps to think before doing something.

[Mabelma]

That is true. I thought of an amazing layout for the website. I'll scan it in a sec to get some critics cause I really want to get it nice.

Here you go:
http://i451.photobucket.com/albums/qq234...Layout.jpg

[Mabelma]

I have made a lot of new edits to the website but I want your opinions on the website and on the layout. Here's the link again: www.mabelma.weebly.com

[Jordan]

rip i'd advertize my ass if it had a website

[Alpha Six]

technically he's not advertising, he's looking for crits now

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maybe i should move this topic hmm

[Mabelma]

To where Tyvon and yeah I'm not really advertising. I'm looking for critics.

[Alpha Six]

I'll move it to Creativity for now, I guess. It seems like a better place than GD.

[Mabelma]

Thanks for doing that and for changing the title. It's way better here. I'll get to work on a background now.

[Shawn]

I'm a FreeLance Artist who loves working with people. I have been in the artist industry for about 3 years.

you have not

I can make vectors, icons, game graphics, logos, web designs, company mascots, stationary logos, concept art ,among others.

no you cant

Skills:
- Illustrator (Advance)
- Photoshop (Average)
- Concept Art (Advance)
- Flash (Average)

my ass

[CeeY]

.weebly.com :/
Using site hosts with preloaded skins are not going to make your portfolio any better.