the leg beside the dna strand still looks terrible
why is it bent like that

(12-13-2009, 09:56 AM)Metaru Wrote: looks like an ape holding a cane.

but seriously, he looks unbalanced and the DNA stuff is too blocky.

Either that's his broken foot or where his knee's supposed to bend. Either way, it's totally fucked up.

Ive straightened out the leg and added a bit of shading. Please tell me if the shading helps

Also, I don't know how to make the tentacles less blocky, so I may need some help there



EDIT: oh and by the way, i made the leg bent for a kind of 'badass' feel to him

Getting there, but he's slouching and still looks like an old man holding a cane.

why is the leg closest to us an incredibly sharp spike?
Make it like the other leg.

ok, Deoxys is slowly but surely getting there

let me get it clear, you're aiming to create a sprite of deoxys on his normal form that mimics the original style of the games, am i right? because you haven't stated what are you trying to achieve.

the arm closest to is is still way too stiff.
Make it bend at least a little.

ok, sorry about not explaining, but i have tried to make deoxys look like the first frame from diamond and pearl

also, i am trying to just get a simple sprite of deoxys, and all the other sprites will be based around it, so for now, could you guys just comment on the way it looks in general and not the pose itself, because that would be a great help.

(12-16-2009, 10:45 AM)Aurapigonstilts Wrote: so for now, could you guys just comment on the way it looks in general and not the pose itself

This post makes no sense
the pose is part of how it looks

No, i mean the way it looks as in colours and the way it's body parts look etc, and not the way that its standing

Well, if what you're basing it off of is correct, the pose should be the same, even if the parts aren't the same.

im not working on the pose yet

you should probably consider working on the pose first, then, since the pose can bring the whole sprite together in terms of shading and what the individual parts look like, since the parts would have to be moved around for a pose, and thus essentially redrawn.