Ew. Fire doesn't look right. :/

how could i fix it

Well, it just needs to look more like fire...

Hmmmm... So... You're working on Pikmin sprites, huh?

....... All I could say is that they really need more animation frames. I know that you want to make these sprites only for comics, but do any of the sprite sheets you use on this site are only just for comics?

You see, sprite sheet aren't just for comics. If a sprite sheet has very good animation, then it is more than likely to be used in a Flash animation! If you take a look at the M&LS styled Wario and Waluigi sprites, you can see that there are a lot of frames for both sprite sheets. Even though they are constantly used for one sprite comic after another (even mediocre ones like Crazy Comics and other Smack Jeeves comics just like it), the sprite sheets were used in that Newgrounds masterpiece, Super Mario Bros. Z!

If you want to make your sprites only for comics (and have them less than likely accepted by the site), then that is your choice. However, if you took the time to give the sprites a few more animation frames, then not only will the sprites be accepted, but also there will be a strong chance they will be used in another fantastic Newgrounds Flash animation.

All edits exsept for coustom

Reasons for making this:

1.There are very little pikmin sprites in the spriters recorce
2.Edits=more animations(Happy now?)
3.I was bored

Dont say stuff like finnish one thing before you go to another, becuse I'm making them all at once and will continue like that.

if you have the time, can you give C+C for each sprite?

they're all horrible and this is my final post on this thread.

I quit giving feedback that falls of deaf ears.

(12-17-2009, 05:34 PM)Pikmin Awsomeness Wrote:

All edits exsept for coustom

Reasons for making this:

1.There are very little pikmin sprites in the spriters recorce
2.Edits=more animations(Happy now?)
3.I was bored

Dont say stuff like finnish one thing before you go to another, becuse I'm making them all at once and will continue like that.

if you have the time, can you give C+C for each sprite?

You're making edit sprites for more animation, huh? ....... Not what I had in mind, but it will have to due for now...

Can I see the edits' animations in action? That will allow me to give you more judgement and see if there's anything you need to correct.

There's a certain charm in president Wario, despite it not being a very good sprite.

I'm a little rusty, but wouldn't the pellet shading look like this (like a tube)?

(12-17-2009, 06:25 PM)Pikmin Awsomeness Wrote:

Seems kind of jerky if you ask me.

Can you try adding more frames to that to make the animation smoother?

those where the only sprites mario had in SML 2

(12-17-2009, 06:43 PM)Pikmin Awsomeness Wrote: those where the only sprites mario had in SML 2

I see.....

Despite being the only sprites Mario had, can you make more to make the animation look smoother?

he's walking backwards, and I don't care what you say, but coming from everyone that knows what they're doing actually LISTEN TO THESE.

(11-30-2009, 06:32 PM)Teddy The Elite Wrote: Stop changing what you're doing! >

(11-30-2009, 07:30 PM)Number Six Wrote: Those animations are PAINFULLY choppy. DEFINITELY needs more frames.

(12-08-2009, 08:49 PM)Teddy The Elite Wrote: Definate more frames for animation purposes.

(12-10-2009, 07:19 AM)Mickupo Wrote: you could add some frames there. The attack animations need them.

(12-10-2009, 07:27 PM)Metaru Wrote: you haven't improved these pikmins in the 5 pages of this thread.

(12-10-2009, 07:55 PM)Vipershark Wrote: stop making excuses and just fully animate them.
It's not that hard.

(12-16-2009, 05:03 PM)E-Man Wrote: ....... All I could say is that they really need more animation frames.

Is that enough for you? And you need to actually READ THEM AND RESPOND INSTEAD OF MAKING EXCUSES AND GOING ON TO OTHER THINGS.
Seriously, it's like all you want is people to praise them instead of HELPING YOU.

(12-17-2009, 07:07 PM)Pikmin Awsomeness Wrote:

Hey... You're getting better! This is exactly what I'm talking about!