Ariand54321 Wrote:click the icon

I don't see an Icon.

It's not showing up for me, either, as something seems to be broken with the direct linking. However, copying and pasting the link from his post works, so...

The updated sheet is in the queue, HyperSonic92.

I fixed the button problem guys

also added swimming, drowning, and getting a Super 'Shroom

Yes, he's still alive! Better, but I guess his "shroom wears off" effect could be a short version fo the "dizzy" animation, just to take a shortcut, eh?

added Super Shroom Wearing Off/Getting Poision Shroom, Knocked Backwards, "Star" Finish, and Sleeping

This sheet is huge. Someone better use it, for all the effort put into it...

Added the 2nd Idle

and sorry for using a MFGG link but my imagehost is blocking me out for some reason. Also I wanted it to be know what other websites love my work

(09-02-2008, 05:43 PM)Guy101 Wrote: I cant make threads! But i have something in working called "the mariokart lot". See a preview: http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=29fxzc3&s=4

Okay look this is HIS topic we don't need you coming in and BROADCASTING your bad recolors and pictures for the WORLD to see, didn't you even read the rules on how to activate your account, now please stop continuously showing us yours, this is Hypes stuff, and we care about his here, not yours. And if you cant make a topic, then dont go into other peoples topics showing careless work!

You tell him CY. Now about the update...

Looks nice. Again, have I told you this sheet is epic?

I hope somebody ends up using this whole sheet...

(09-02-2008, 08:02 PM)HyperSonic92 Wrote: You tell him CY. Now about the update...

NP his post was deleted, anyway the sheet is awesome! The ONLY thing that bugs me is Watt, hes too flat, make him shine more, otherwise Excellent Job!

Um, flat? Hello? "Paper Mario"?

yeah I'm waiting for Star to help me with it. He said he'd fix Watt but I haven't heard from him. Probably busy with both school and "you know what"

My opinion about the sheet and some changes:
The sheet is great,but i think it needs some changes,as the title says.
First,the Final Smash is good,but in my opinion,not TOO good...
It could be:
Mega Star - Who not likes getting the Mega Star in Super Paper Mario?
Mystery? - Yes,that item from Paper Mario 64!It could cause random effects according to the selected item:
Thunder Rage - A thunder strikes all characters,making 30% damage.
Stone Cap - Makes Mario immobile,but also invincible.
Dizzy Dial - Makes all characters(including Mario) dizzy(Same status as broken shield) and 20% damage.
Sleepy Sheep - Makes all characters sleep,except the characters in air(Where they can avoid the sheeps).

A good Forward Smash/Forward Tilt could be a Spin Smash variation,with horizontal knockback.
The Up Special Move could be the Power/Mega Jump.It could be like the actual Up Special,but with some effects...Later i'll upload an animation showing it.
The Down Special could be Mario using Watt as defense.
The Side Special is good,but,please,change the normal hammer by the ultra hammer :/
Or,change it for a Shell Toss from Kooper/Koops.
The Neutral Special could be the same(but with the Ultra Hammer),or the Boomer special in the sheet.

That's all my opinion about the sheet.
Note - 9.8/10.0

IMHO this needs some work. The best thing about the sheet is the idle and if I recall correctly Rokkan made that, at least part of it. Most of the poses are just rotations and skewers, which in this case is fine because its paper mario, but they all look jagged and messy. The custom parts (the koopa shell, the sparky dude, the final smash) are all in need of contrast and very pillowshaded. Lots of the attacks need some motion blur (the standard a for example) and some of them don't even look like attacks (forward tilt). Its an okay sheet, but it needs loads of work.