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Vipershark jinxed it. - Gors - 12-17-2008

at making witty titles.

[Image: yellowbb5.png]

I'm working on this PA... C+C please.

RE: I suck - JarJar - 12-17-2008

Ho ho ho nice title, anyway theres bumps on that person's hair, the lineart for that should smooth and round, no?

RE: I suck - CeeY - 12-17-2008

The beanstalk is looking good!

RE: I suck - Gors - 12-17-2008

(12-17-2008, 09:12 PM)Subomi~Chan Wrote: Ho ho ho nice title, anyway theres bumps on that person's hair, the lineart for that should smooth and round, no?
I... don't know, the reference I used ( http://www.gamespite.net/toastywiki/index.php/Games/VCGunstarHeroes --scroll down) shows her with that bump, but the sprite itself is hard to see... I'll make a bumpless version.

PS: the 'beanstalk' in the image on the right is bugged. The correct one is the one in the left.

RE: I suck - Gors - 12-19-2008

my friend The Kirby helped with this, so props to him Smile

I'm going to attach it because I'm on a hurry, sorry about the trouble.
[attachment=1656]

RE: I suck - Gors - 12-26-2008

Update, look my avatar

RE: I suck - CeeY - 12-26-2008

looks nice! I love how you shaded the tree!

RE: I suck - Gors - 12-27-2008

I made this for a thread in SM.net, I'm going to post it here, too Smile I don't think I'm going to work on it more, though...

[Image: plushiecs4.png]

RE: I suck - Previous - 12-27-2008

Cute Cute
Could use more anti-aliasing, though.
The head's shape is a bit off, I'd say. The right jaw could be more circular to fit the rest.
Also I think you could go without the highlight on the shoe soles.

But nice overall :]

RE: I suck - Haru-D - 12-27-2008

and more tonal shading to the face, then it will look perfect. Very cartoony. Wink

RE: I suck - CeeY - 12-27-2008

I don't like the hue on the hair, it needs to be blended in.

RE: I suck - Gors - 12-27-2008

Thanks for the comments, guys Smile

I tried to adress all the issues here (yeah, I worked on it more Big Grin). I wasn't sure about CeeY's criticism, what's 'blended hue'? Also, I believe the tonal shading is increasing the contrast on the skin shade, right? Sorry if I messed up Sick

I'm going to attach it because I can't go to imageshack for some reason.

RE: I suck - CeeY - 12-27-2008

(12-27-2008, 02:40 PM)gorsal Wrote: Thanks for the comments, guys Smile

I tried to adress all the issues here (yeah, I worked on it more Big Grin). I wasn't sure about CeeY's criticism, what's 'blended hue'? Also, I believe the tonal shading is increasing the contrast on the skin shade, right? Sorry if I messed up Sick

I'm going to attach it because I can't go to imageshack for some reason.
The white dot doesn't fit well with the pink. It needs more blending.

RE: I suck - Pik - 12-27-2008

I guess what he means is It needs to follow the shape of the hair.

RE: I suck - Gors - 12-28-2008

okay, I'll work on it Smile expect an update soon