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Blue Amazonian - mozzy - 04-19-2009
VERY WIP portrait of an Amazonian woman, I don't know if I've going to keep it in blue or fully color it since I originally made it in blue to keep my eyes from hurting but it's kind of growing on me.
![[Image: ew-3.png]](http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s268/mozzymuradyasin/ew-3.png)
Super sketchy I know, but tell me what you think so far.
RE: Blue Amazonian - mozzy - 04-19-2009
crit me you pricks :C
RE: Blue Amazonian - Codestar - 04-19-2009
I think a little more of the top of her eyelids should be showing and there's just something about the lips that I can't put my finger on. Doesn't seem all that feminine. Kinda gives a whole bill cosby look to her lol
RE: Blue Amazonian - Koopaul - 04-19-2009
I like the blue. My only complaint is her bottom lip. It seems wierd.
I really like it though. Keep going!
RE: Blue Amazonian - EdpR - 04-19-2009
u suck
...Not.
C: You're awesome mozz
Do you accept edits?
Edit: I can't explain what's wrong, my vocabulary ain't that big :C
RE: Blue Amazonian - mozzy - 04-19-2009
Go ahead and edit if you like!
Latest, changed the lips, still don't like the shape though. Cleaned some of it up some more.
![[Image: ew-4.png]](http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s268/mozzymuradyasin/ew-4.png)
RE: Blue Amazonian - EdpR - 04-19-2009
![[Image: amazonw.png]](http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/1/amazonw.png)
I tried to fix her nose and lips
RE: Blue Amazonian - Codestar - 04-19-2009
the bottom lip needs to be bigger than the top lip.
RE: Blue Amazonian - mozzy - 04-20-2009
![[Image: ew-5.png]](http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s268/mozzymuradyasin/ew-5.png)
Fixed?
RE: Blue Amazonian - Rökkan - 04-20-2009
continue please ooo:
RE: Blue Amazonian - mozzy - 04-20-2009
Worked on the nose/cheek/eyes.
![[Image: ew27657.png]](http://www.iaza.com/work/090421C/ew27657.png)
RE: Blue Amazonian - Alpha Six - 04-20-2009
It's shaping up really well... now start messing with some of the other shades on the outside.
EDIT: Oh, and that nose needs a bit of work. With the way the perspective is, the nose shouldn't be facing the way it is. It's bent to the darker side of the PA too much, and the nostril makes it look like she's twin-nosed.
RE: Blue Amazonian - mozzy - 04-20-2009
Sorry, can you be a little bit more clear on "shades on the outside"?
I'll fix the nose, seemed right to me but I see what you mean.
RE: Blue Amazonian - Alpha Six - 04-20-2009
I mean the ones on the outside as in the darker shades that aren't on the face; namely, the really dark ones on the head.
RE: Blue Amazonian - mozzy - 04-21-2009
Its getting worse!
![[Image: ew-6.png]](http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s268/mozzymuradyasin/ew-6.png)