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"And Brotha, I hurt People" - Cobalt Blue - 07-02-2009
here's a small WIP gif :V
I'm stuck here without knowing what i could add to that huge emty area below ness. Any ideas?(ignore the current backpack.
![[Image: 2irpt85.png]](http://i39.tinypic.com/2irpt85.png)
The Dark green is meant to be Transparent.
RE: "And Brotha, I hurt People" - King of Bad Posters - 07-02-2009
Really cool, can't wait for the finish, it's WIP so no crits.
RE: "And Brotha, I hurt People" - Wavey - 07-02-2009
Yeah, no real crits to be made yet. But I love you fffffff.
The scout's head doesn't look very scouty, unless that's how you meant it to be.
RE: "And Brotha, I hurt People" - Skink - 07-02-2009
I love it. You should add Bonk Energy Drink Cans or the Intel or something.
RE: "And Brotha, I hurt People" - Cobalt Blue - 07-02-2009
the intel seems a great idea indeed. as for the borders of the ground, I'm going to do the same thing Jar jar did for his mini RPG mockup.
RE: "And Brotha, I hurt People" - Cobalt Blue - 07-02-2009
![[Image: 29n80wj.png]](http://i44.tinypic.com/29n80wj.png)
RE: "And Brotha, I hurt People" - Tero - 07-02-2009
The brim of the cap might be a bit too long.
RE: "And Brotha, I hurt People" - Cobalt Blue - 07-02-2009
fixed the cap, added more details, stole jarjar's flowers
![[Image: 2ui96p1.png]](http://i42.tinypic.com/2ui96p1.png)
just noticed the Suitcase could use more contrast and a shadow.
RE: "And Brotha, I hurt People" - Cobalt Blue - 07-03-2009
![[Image: jjr8te.gif]](http://i41.tinypic.com/jjr8te.gif)
well this could be the final version, but can i request some feedback? you know, i'm not posting this shit just to "display" it.
RE: "And Brotha, I hurt People" - mozzy - 07-03-2009
The tree looks rather flat, maybe add another shade? Othewise, looks finished to me.
RE: "And Brotha, I hurt People" - Dazz - 07-03-2009
That hand and arm with the bat looks fucking odd - any way you could make it look more natural?
RE: "And Brotha, I hurt People" - Cobalt Blue - 07-03-2009
i think its related to the way the arm is drawn... it has no forearm(despite the perspective i tried to give it.
![[Image: 2cghr3r.gif]](http://i39.tinypic.com/2cghr3r.gif)
shortened the arm, gave it an elbow, and i made the tree flat on purpose, since i want to focus everything on the two characters.
RE: "And Brotha, I hurt People" - Dazz - 07-03-2009
This is going to sound really fucking picky but.... Add one more pixel of black to the bottom of the elbow to make the cure less square...
edit: and take a couple off the top of the elbow bit, to make the curve less 1/1 and more 1/2... I can't explain what I mean.
RE: "And Brotha, I hurt People" - Cobalt Blue - 07-03-2009
but i get what you mean. and please, the more picky you are, the better stuff gets fixed. every single detail counts.
![[Image: 1zpmwra.png]](http://i41.tinypic.com/1zpmwra.png)
made the elbow more round
RE: "And Brotha, I hurt People" - Wavey - 07-03-2009
but, but the tree still looks halfassed, jk
the paper looks kinda out of place but that may just be me
nice job so far, things look pretty finished.