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RE: Doodles and Finished Pieces. - BynineB - 03-21-2012
So I tableted an abaasy which is a turkish demon that has one eye, arm, and leg and rides a dragon.
![[Image: Abaasy.png]](http://i1138.photobucket.com/albums/n529/ChibiWaira/Abaasy.png)
But I have no idea how to make smooth outlines. Every time I try to make a nice black outline it ends up really wavy and messy looking.
HELP
RE: Doodles and Finished Pieces. - Kakashifan - 03-22-2012
tracing digitally over an outline with the line/curve tool. First time doing it; gonna fix the mistakes once i dont need the outline and can delete that layer.
![[Image: wipanatomymale.jpg]](http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/3549/wipanatomymale.jpg)
small improvment with right arm and removed outline. shoulder is bugging me though/....
![[Image: kakashihotwip1001.png]](http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/1115/kakashihotwip1001.png)
RE: Doodles and Finished Pieces. - Mutsukki - 03-22-2012
You should really look on how legs connect at all, they're very thin too! The same could be said about the arms. Keep praticing!
RE: Doodles and Finished Pieces. - Kakashifan - 03-22-2012
yeah. I got rid of the right leg. reworked the left arm partly...gonna go back to the right now that you've said something.
new edit with bigger arms.
![[Image: kakashihotwip1.jpg]](http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/5905/kakashihotwip1.jpg)
RE: Doodles and Finished Pieces. - Gwen - 03-22-2012
The head and neck are also proportionally way to small for that body. The head needs enlargement and the neck needs major beefing up.
RE: Doodles and Finished Pieces. - Kakashifan - 03-22-2012
imageshack took it fine before...screw imageshack. screw them. updated in my last post. ill do that thx.
![[Image: kakashihotwip1.jpg]](http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/5905/kakashihotwip1.jpg)
RE: Doodles and Finished Pieces. - Gors - 03-22-2012
nope, not good yet
the base you're using for tracing is all wonky and off-proportions.
study anatomy more, look for real references etc. the way it is now is ugly.
RE: Doodles and Finished Pieces. - Kakashifan - 03-22-2012
i made it myself thats why. Ill find some tuts on deviant, study those and compare them then.
RE: Doodles and Finished Pieces. - Maxpphire - 03-22-2012
All art should be made by the artist themselves. Your anatomy sucks, go to the library, get a book on anatomy, medical ones work well if you can't find a good one otherwise, and study it.
RE: Doodles and Finished Pieces. - Chris2Balls [:B] - 03-22-2012
![[Image: 2JDQc.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/2JDQc.jpg)
![[Image: bbkFh.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/bbkFh.jpg)
![[Image: wAHXQ.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/wAHXQ.jpg)
Sketches I did today of plaster busts/models.
RE: Doodles and Finished Pieces. - Baegal - 03-22-2012
I don't know what it is about them, but I love your sketches, C2B. The way you do hair is awesome in an unexplainable way.
RE: Doodles and Finished Pieces. - Kakashifan - 03-22-2012
it's just soo wavy~ I can't get mine like that lol.
looked up some tuts; the whole box/cube thing is tharder for me. i dunno why but i do get why it is necessary.
with that pose i was trying to do a laying down thing. usually i draw ppl standing, so that would've been a good change of pace. I'll figure this out~ *anme catchphrase here*
RE: Doodles and Finished Pieces. - Mutsukki - 03-22-2012
(03-22-2012, 05:29 PM)Kakashifan Wrote: it's just soo wavy~ I can't get mine like that lol.
looked up some tuts; the whole box/cube thing is tharder for me. i dunno why but i do get why it is necessary.
with that pose i was trying to do a laying down thing. usually i draw ppl standing, so that would've been a good change of pace. I'll figure this out~ *anme catchphrase here*
While you should study proper anatomy, it's good to get references too, you can find photo of people in this pose or similar if you search for it.
RE: Doodles and Finished Pieces. - Gaia - 03-22-2012
An anatomy practice doodle. My main problem here is the balance between the head and the body, since it looks kinda off compared to the rest of the body:
![[Image: 14t2cdh.png]](http://i39.tinypic.com/14t2cdh.png)
RE: Doodles and Finished Pieces. - Koopaul - 03-22-2012
Legs to the body as well. Those legs look kinda small compared to the torso. I suggest making the legs a little longer.