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RE: [Kirbyfan42] Mr. Shine WIP - Kirbyfan - 02-10-2013

I'm going crater-less, with limbs. Thank you all for your input; many good, valid points were made.

@Baegal
I think that the eye is visible enough as is, but I do see the issue with the perspective ad the face. I may change the thickness and/or angle of the body, but I may just adjust the eye to match. (I think the mouth is actually pretty well done)
Do you think you could explain a little more on what you meant about the perspective issues? I kinda understand, but not enough to make a fix.

@tonberry
I will probably add some craters to see what happens, but I don't anticipate liking the outcome, so I'm going to plan on not having them. =P
Thanks, though. Cool idea.

Note:
I'm a student. My weeks are taken. Work on this will resume this weekend. =P

RE: [Kirbyfan42] Mr. Shine WIP - Kirbyfan - 02-13-2013

Just trying to pull in an opinion. Should I make a sheet of this?

I would be remaking what Mr. Shine does in Adventure/KID. (but prettier)

If I were to sheet it, I would probably make the change Baegal suggested. I had originally chosen the angle without the intent of animating, and Baegal's would be much better to work with.

RE: [Kirbyfan42] Mr. Shine WIP - Garamonde - 02-13-2013

(02-13-2013, 08:35 PM)Kirbyfan Wrote: Just trying to pull in an opinion. Should I make a sheet of this?

yesyesyes

RE: [Kirbyfan42] Mr. Shine WIP - Gors - 02-14-2013

The main problem you're facing right now is that Mr. Bright, as he is, IS supposed to be flat. His design is based on an 2D icon of a moon, and trying to port it in 3D will make him look warped and unlike his original design. Of course, this isn't bad, as giving a character your own spin is a great thing. I'm just making sure you know this.

This being said,

[Image: sLvUqSj.png]

In both examples here, I hate how the points are literal squares instead of being pointy. Work on it.

RE: [Kirbyfan42] Mr. Shine WIP - Kirbyfan - 02-14-2013

@Gorsal
*Mr. Shine ;D

The issue with the points was mostly fixed when the shading and other work was done. That was more of a temporary "sketch" of the shape.
[Image: mrshine21_zps385cf87b.png](same as before, just reposted)
Not as square, though the bottom still isn't so great.

I never interpreted him as being flat, necessarily, though I guess that's one way of looking at it. I suppose I grew up knowing the original Kirby's Adventure version first, where you couldn't really tell.

RE: [Kirbyfan42] Mr. Shine WIP - Baegal - 02-14-2013

Blah, it's hard for me to explain
basically, you have the view too close to the front view, and it should be more to a profile IMO.
[Image: UnJtoAC.png]
You have A, I think it should be more like B

EDIT: Ninja'd. My explanation still stands, it just seems a little weird now given the flow of the thread. Whatever.

RE: [Kirbyfan42] Mr. Shine WIP - Kirbyfan - 02-14-2013

Ah, gotcha gotcha. Yes, I do think that rotation would be a good change, especially if I'm planning to make a sheet.

I'll get to work on this tomorrow. Expect some updates late tomorrow/Saturday.