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RE: a new type of packman? - BIG PIRANHA - 09-22-2008

ok tx for advice =) here it is tell me wat u think[Image: slige5cr8.th.png][Image: thpix.gif]

RE: a new type of packman? - killme - 09-22-2008

There are 2 things I noticed...

1: The outline at the bottom right looks jagged.
2: The outline shoud be a darker shade of green, not black.

Its ok. Keep trying.

RE: a new type of packman? - Chdonga - 09-22-2008

It's still too jagged.

RE: a new type of packman? - BIG PIRANHA - 09-22-2008

ok, well i tryed working on the edges here it is [Image: slige6ku0.th.png][Image: thpix.gif]

thanx for giving advice guys =)

RE: a new type of packman? - killme - 09-22-2008

The mouth is too bold. Dull it down a bit.

RE: a new type of packman? - BIG PIRANHA - 09-22-2008

i see this is wat i got [Image: slige7zy8.th.png][Image: thpix.gif]

thanks for the advice =)
ok i made the mouth opening faze i no the opening mouth needs some work but this is wat i got so far

[Image: slige8qj5.th.png][Image: thpix.gif]

RE: a new type of packman? - TPoe - 09-22-2008

(09-21-2008, 04:38 PM)gorsal Wrote: No teacher would say that to someone.

Lies, I've had some pretty bad teachers my friend.

RE: a new type of packman? - Gors - 09-23-2008

(09-22-2008, 11:46 PM)TPoe Wrote:
(09-21-2008, 04:38 PM)gorsal Wrote: No teacher would say that to someone.

Lies, I've had some pretty bad teachers my friend.
whoa, that's messed up... I feel sorry for you... Sad

on-topic, you're certainly improving... that's good Smile

But try to keep its outline smoother. Also, his cheek shading doesn't work anymore, so try playing with it a bit.

Again, don't use line tool. It makes your sprite look bad. try making it more life-like. A bacteria isn't totally straight, you know.
His chin looks bigger in the second sprite. Make it smaller. Your chin doesn't grow when you open your mouth Smile Also, keep his details constant (your first sprite has 5 teeth showing, but your second sprite has 4. Did it lose its teeth when eating?)

RE: a new type of packman? - BIG PIRANHA - 09-23-2008

ok, ive made a phew changes in its color. im still working on its shape,im trying to find a bacteria alagator type shape
but this is the change of color
[Image: slige9am5.th.png][Image: thpix.gif]
thanks for the advice =)

RE: a new type of packman? - Chdonga - 09-23-2008

(09-23-2008, 04:25 PM)BIG PIRANHA Wrote: Ok, Ive made a few changes in its color. I'm still working on its shape, I'm trying to find a bacteria alligator type shape but this is a change of color.
thanks for the advice =)
1. You don't need to thank us every post.
2. I doubt bacteria is alligator shaped so you shouldn't make it like that. The mouth looks weird when it opens. If it's supposed to look like a real bacteria you might need a picture referral like this, but if not, never mind.

RE: a new type of packman? - BIG PIRANHA - 09-23-2008

to make him look more like a bacteria [Image: slige10zc7.th.png][Image: thpix.gif]
does this look any better?

RE: a new type of packman? - Combine_Advisor - 09-23-2008

I read the whole thing. I agree with most people that the edges are how you say? edgy... but i think it would look cool in a game! Shading is great and color works. Maybe try increasing eye size more?

RE: a new type of packman? - BIG PIRANHA - 09-23-2008

ok, ive changed it to a blue bacteria type color and have different possiblities of what it should look like
and i no i gota fix the mouth opening part.
[Image: slige11uc9.th.png][Image: thpix.gif]



i aint givin up

RE: a new type of packman? - killme - 09-24-2008

How'd he get banned?
OK! PLEASE UNBAN HIM. PLEASE!!! I'M TELLING THE TRUTH! HES JUST MY FRIEND! DID I SEEM LIKE A BAD GUY WHEN I 1ST GOT HERE... well... I hope you say no =P. BUT PLEASE UNBAN HIM! I BEG OF YOU!!!