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RE: Redid old stuff - mozzy - 10-24-2008
Made what I expected to find in this topic.
![[Image: jfdla.png]](http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s268/mozzymuradyasin/jfdla.png)
This green guy is my favorite, very cute.
Honestly, almost none of these guys loook like they can stand upright in the pose they're in.
Removed a lot of the black from the style because at first glance I thought there was a giant black star fish stuck on his side. The shading style doesn't look very consistent either.
You need to use more interesting colors too (not that mine are any better, just used first thing I could mix)
Seriously, it isn't that hard to totally redo something in this style, this thing took me like 3 minutes literally.
Also everything looks really sketchy and unappealing (even if "sketchy" was what you were aiming for (I think I read that in this topic, not sure) it just looks bleh).
So yeah, really remake it this time, it just looks like a quick edit.
RE: Redid old stuff - Phantom Killah - 10-24-2008
I don't know how to fix it though
Edit: Didn't see Mozz's post.
Thanks, I'll try again.
RE: Redid old stuff - mozzy - 10-24-2008
Wait was that a reply to me, because I totally just gave you a bunch of crits and an edit.
Edit: lol ok
RE: Redid old stuff - CeeY - 10-24-2008
Mozz edit pretty much explains it. Most of them are leaning back way too much, make them stand strait. I don't like how the black is a little overused though.
RE: Redid old stuff - Phantom Killah - 10-24-2008
![[Image: 2m7936e.png]](http://i34.tinypic.com/2m7936e.png)
RE: Redid old stuff - Vipershark - 10-24-2008
PK, Mozz got perfectly what I was trying to say. Yes, I could tell that the bottom row was updated, but tbqh they still looked like crap.
The new one is much better. That's basically what I was aiming for with my post. You can keep the black because it's part of the style, but tone it way down and update the other stuff.
RE: Redid old stuff - Phantom Killah - 10-24-2008
Yeh, thanks. I think I see now.
![[Image: 2vlnpde.png]](http://i35.tinypic.com/2vlnpde.png)
RE: Redid old stuff - CeeY - 10-25-2008
Getting much better PK! Just do the same basic idea with them, and they will be fine.
RE: Redid old stuff - Phantom Killah - 10-25-2008
![[Image: 2w228ax.png]](http://i38.tinypic.com/2w228ax.png)
RE: Redid old stuff - Confessor - 10-25-2008
Are the top row new? If so you've slipped back to your old style with the last 3.
First 2 look very good though imo.
RE: Redid old stuff - Geo the Fox - 10-25-2008
That fat guy looks like Snorlax.
RE: Redid old stuff - Phantom Killah - 10-25-2008
(10-25-2008, 07:50 PM)Geo the Fox Wrote: That fat guy looks like Snorlax.
Snorlax looks like a teddy bear.
Edit:
![[Image: 10pwx90.png]](http://i37.tinypic.com/10pwx90.png)
Completely redesigned the blue robot. Red robot is next.
RE: Redid old stuff - Koopaul - 10-26-2008
How are you gonna redesign the stickly man? Seems uninteresting without some meat on his pixels.
RE: Redid old stuff - Phantom Killah - 10-26-2008
(10-26-2008, 12:28 AM)koopaul Wrote: How are you gonna redesign the stickly man? Seems uninteresting without some meat on his pixels.
I'm not entirely sure, I'll have to think about that.
RE: Redid old stuff - Phantom Killah - 10-26-2008
![[Image: 8x4ehe.png]](http://i33.tinypic.com/8x4ehe.png)