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RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - Virtuaboy123 - 02-05-2017

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Boss: General Pink

Soldiers: Grunt, Sergeant, Elite (decided to go with closed legs)

RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - x0_000 - 02-05-2017

General Pink could use more work, the pink suit part is pillowshaded. I'm not sure exactly what you're going for with the pants too, is it supposed to be baggy wrinkles, or scratch marks...? The soldiers look cool, although the Elite's helmet is hard to read at the face/mouth area.

RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - Guy - 02-06-2017

(02-04-2017, 05:37 AM)Virtuaboy123 Wrote: Thanks for the CC I kinda used a bit of both of your recommendations. Changed the face up slightly too
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Also for the other character I was wondering if a more cartoony big head looks better to match the style I've been going for.

Also working on another Berserk pixel art, it's Femto doing in a devil's reverse pose (m bison). And like the manga I'm going to update this one slowly...
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I'll get the whole pose done then work on shading.

The smaller head works better, has a more aesthetic appeal brother, the rough for Femto is VERY rough, it looks like he has about half the amount of back he should have as well as the furthest leg being offset too much to the right, like a dislocated knee.

I agree with x0, in that the elites face is very hard to read, my eyesights starting to go lately but while i can see the first 3 fine, the 4th (elite) looks a bit jumbled in the face area.


Your palettes are awesome, and feel like something from an early Snes/Sega game, I don't critique much but I love seeing artist with real talent looking to get better, I hope you post at least once or twice more, keep it up!

RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - Virtuaboy123 - 02-06-2017

I tried fixing the legs, they did look horrible from far off. I'm still working on how the legs should look, I'm working with a set height for these characters.
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I also made a sort of golem/living statue enemy. Which is better with eyebrows or not?

Again with the Femto pixel
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This is how the pose looks

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I made his back a little longer, again it'll look better once I refine it.

RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - Virtuaboy123 - 02-06-2017

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I decided to change her legs positioning all together. Also a AW1 style of her character.

The other character is general green (changed his out fit), there's 3 versions with differing pant shading. Which one looks best?
Finally reworked the statue's face and some of the shading.

edit:
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RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - Virtuaboy123 - 02-07-2017

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Electro, Thunder Ball, That thing from kirby's amazing adventure.
Roach, Sturdy bug, Golden bugger.
Reworked : Hood Rat/Street Rodent, Tribalmen (pose), Devil guy
Eye Cultist, Tutti Bird, Tapirs, Macho men
Scanners, Psycho Psychic, Grey, Illegal Alien

Any CC for my last two post would be great!

RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - Virtuaboy123 - 02-10-2017

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Few more enemies redone from a while back.

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Made up advance wars factions, Violet Storm, Pink Nova, Cyan Spades.

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Random nes screen mockup

RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - Virtuaboy123 - 02-17-2017

New items
Barrier seal, status pills, Cupcake, Energy Drink (redone), Carbonium Fist, Red Potion
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RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - Virtuaboy123 - 02-24-2017

Few Updates

A sheet of all the enemies others and I thought up. I'm still making more/editing others.
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Tile sheet that works in RPGMaker VX (in progress)
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Here's a sample of it.
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RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - Virtuaboy123 - 03-14-2017

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A little update

I made newer houses and some mugshots

RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - miyabi95_ - 03-14-2017

nice goenitz

RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - Virtuaboy123 - 03-14-2017

A little battle scene mockup
Using the RPG Maker Engine. I think it looks good.

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RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - Gors - 03-15-2017

im sorry but that mockup is shit


two shits.

RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - Virtuaboy123 - 04-15-2017

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For the player character I thought of letting him/her be customizable! I tried to use a decent variety of faces, I'll probably narrow it down to 6 faces and 6 hair styles.

RE: 2017 Work/Critque Thread - Virtuaboy123 - 04-15-2017

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Thank goodness I made a template.

With it NPC characters can be quickly made along with player characters.

I think I'll go with 3 looks the player can choose from. (Green,Red,Blue!)
I tried to make the guy characters look like the works of Toriyama/Otomo/Nagai.
This is because their styles I liked and they vary enough for me.
I may do the same for the female characters also.

The starting classes down the list are (Nobody,Fighter,Psychic,Hunter,Soldier)
Certain Items will change your appearance or costume also. (Afro/TigerMask/SoldierUniform/etc)