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RE: Charizard - D2S-Speed - 04-15-2010
Awesome start, though I think the top of the neck where his connects should be a bit thicker.
RE: Charizard - Gold - 04-15-2010
Beautiful start, you have my full support behind this.
RE: Charizard - Ton - 04-15-2010
Much better!
RE: Charizard - Sengir - 04-15-2010
the charizard doesn't seem like it's in style. you should make it more like the bowser by exaggerating the proportions just a little, especially the head.
RE: Charizard - JoshR691 - 04-15-2010
Hope you don't mind, I didn't think the face looked like Charizard, so I made a quick edit:
![[Image: char1j.png]](http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/1950/char1j.png)
RE: Charizard - Alpha Six - 04-15-2010
He should be leaning forward more.
RE: Charizard - Wes - 04-15-2010
Yeah the lower jaw was the biggest problem I had. Your's is a bit too rounded IMO Josh. but you did improve the snout part a lot.
1 is my newest, 2 is Josh's edit, 3 is original
![[Image: charizardv.png]](http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/4971/charizardv.png)
@Tyvon: I was just messing around with the stance a bit. Bowser was hunched a lot in brawl and we straightened him up in our sprite, so I tried something similar. If it doesn't looks better, I can easily change it.
EDIT: bottom right is hunched over, left is upright
RE: Charizard - Sengir - 04-15-2010
I'm not a good spriter by any means, but I tried my best to correct what I thought was wrong:
![[Image: 21niqlw.jpg]](http://i39.tinypic.com/21niqlw.jpg)
RE: Charizard - Koopaul - 04-15-2010
Could be hunched over a little bit more.
RE: Charizard - Wes - 04-15-2010
@Sengir: IMO it's way too dark without the lightest shade, but it does look better without the outline on the belly. I think the further back head spike on your's sticks out too much and looks more like a rabbit ear than a horn.
So one more try.
Not so hunched and hunched. I think I got the head right this time though.
![[Image: charizardj.png]](http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/4180/charizardj.png)
RE: Charizard - Mallacxo - 04-15-2010
Looks good.
Is the female trainer gonna have a female Charizard then or her own different Pokemon?
RE: Charizard - Wes - 04-15-2010
(04-15-2010, 10:37 PM)Andy Justicehammer Wrote: Looks good.Charizard doesn't have gender differences, and I don't even know if we're using the Female Trainer.
Is the female trainer gonna have a female Charizard then or her own different Pokemon?
Edit: Update with arms and on outline of the wings
![[Image: charizardc.png]](http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/8241/charizardc.png)
RE: Charizard - Baegal - 04-16-2010
fix his belly shading more like sengir's, your darkest shade has too much contrast. His shading is also really blocky, and I personally like sengir's~
RE: Charizard - Wes - 04-16-2010
(04-16-2010, 04:08 PM)Baegal Wrote: fix his belly shading more like sengir's, your darkest shade has too much contrast. His shading is also really blocky, and I personally like sengir's~Which shading was blocky, the belly or the whole thing? Because aside from mine having an extra lightest shade, the shading on the body is pretty much the same. But yeah, here's new belly shading.
![[Image: charizardo.png]](http://img534.imageshack.us/img534/2435/charizardo.png)
RE: Charizard - Alpha Six - 04-16-2010
Looks great with the arms, but he still looks like he's not leaning far forward enough.