Marona and Mocha - Printable Version

Marona and Mocha - Printable Version

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RE: Marona and Putty - Mabelma - 03-13-2009

I did say constructive stuff see:
Anyways about the hands I meant that the fingers don't actually look natural.
And the heart emotion looks more like a boot instead of an actual heart.
Forget it you don't have to care the only who has to care is Anubis cause I'm criticizing his sprites.

RE: Marona and Putty - Chris2Balls [:B] - 03-13-2009

(03-13-2009, 02:49 PM)Mabelma Wrote: WTF why is everyone hating me?
I'm trying to help and Judith I did said something constructive.
Oh god.
Anyways Anubis I hope to see something really good after you fix it cause this one is awesome.

*honh honh honh*
I think you should make Putty face the complete opposite direction, as in the body faces the other way, and the head facing more the right. This would emphasise more on the love/hate relationship (?).

RE: Marona and Putty - JarJar - 03-13-2009

(03-13-2009, 03:16 PM)Chris2Balls [:B] Wrote:
(03-13-2009, 02:49 PM)Mabelma Wrote: WTF why is everyone hating me?
I'm trying to help and Judith I did said something constructive.
Oh god.
Anyways Anubis I hope to see something really good after you fix it cause this one is awesome.
*honh honh honh*
I think you should make Putty face the complete opposite direction, as in the body faces the other way, and the head facing more the right. This would emphasise more on the love/hate relationship (?).

There is no love/hate realtionship, putties always look like that(they have no expressions). And I edited him anyway.

RE: Marona and Putty - Mabelma - 03-13-2009

Funny how you made me say god Anubis in m post.
Hey Anubis are you done with the edit?

RE: Marona and Putty - JarJar - 03-13-2009

(03-13-2009, 03:23 PM)Mabelma Wrote: Funny how you made me say god Anubis in m post.
Hey Anubis are you done with the edit?

I'm gonna say this once, and only once:

STOP.

RE: Marona and Putty - Shawn - 03-13-2009

(03-13-2009, 03:23 PM)Mabelma Wrote: Hey Anubis are you done with the edit?

RE: Marona and Putty - Chris2Balls [:B] - 03-13-2009

Are you planning to do any other trainers and their Pokémon or is this just a one-off?
And how about that Pokémon project of yours?

RE: Marona and Putty - JarJar - 03-13-2009

(03-13-2009, 03:45 PM)Chris2Balls [:B] Wrote: Are you planning to do any other trainers and their Pokémon or is this just a one-off?
And how about that Pokémon project of yours?

This sprite has NOTHING TO DO WITH POKEMON.

RE: Marona and Putty - Mabelma - 03-13-2009

Nice I like the boxart.
I see the resemble between the sprite and the actual art I think you nailed the looked.
You should try the dude too he looks nice but at the same time freaky.
Nice!!

RE: Marona and Putty - Chris2Balls [:B] - 03-13-2009

(03-13-2009, 03:54 PM)Anubis Wrote:
(03-13-2009, 03:45 PM)Chris2Balls [:B] Wrote: Are you planning to do any other trainers and their Pokémon or is this just a one-off?
And how about that Pokémon project of yours?

This sprite has NOTHING TO DO WITH POKEMON.

Thank you for clarifying that. In future I'll check.

RE: Marona and Putty - nairenu - 03-13-2009

hmm, i don't get why your all being so negative, its MUCH better then some other stuff we sometimes see posted,, and i like the way the feet are placed, makes her look all cutesy =3

XD and the heart is good that way, it makes it look like its being blown away from her or something,, love it =3

@mabelma: you can't get more detail into those fingers then there already is, if you would, it would look akward =3

and hands are always hard, im having a very hard time spriting them, heck, im even having a hard time drawing them

RE: Marona and Putty - Mabelma - 03-13-2009

It's not the details of them it's how the right hand interlaces with the other hand but fix it if you can.

RE: Marona and Putty - Gors - 03-13-2009

the way you sprited it resembled Pokémon Tongue

Also I knew it was a heart. Pretty obvious. But I think it'd be cooler if you rotate it just a bit. Like, 23 degrees instead of 45?

RE: Marona and Putty - JarJar - 03-13-2009

I'm done, not editing anymore and some of the crits made it worse in another edit so i'll leave it like this.(check first post)

thanks for the comments though.

RE: Marona and Mocha - Gors - 03-14-2009

okay, then. It's still nice Smile