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RE: BlahBlahBlah Swampert WIP - mozzy - 06-27-2009

-His- left leg is definetly too far back. The arm should be covering the white spot.

RE: BlahBlahBlah Swampert WIP - Helmo - 06-27-2009

(06-27-2009, 02:57 PM)Cshad Wrote: Better?

[Image: swampert.gif]

I need to add the other hand still.


The cheek things are a bit off http://www.freewebs.com/jiexian/images/swampert.jpg

RE: BlahBlahBlah Swampert WIP - Cshad - 06-27-2009

[Image: swampert.gif]

Getting better?

RE: BlahBlahBlah Swampert WIP - Gors - 06-27-2009

I dunno, but the weird fin-like thing above its left eye could be placed more to the left.

RE: BlahBlahBlah Swampert WIP - Cshad - 06-27-2009

http://img196.imageshack.us/img196/6997/pokemonteaml.png

?

EDIT: Made more edits
I swear to god Swamperts head (and back) is out to fucking kill me help please >:

EDIT2:

[Image: swampert.gif]

ED helped me out with the face, it looks alot better now Heart. Thanks man. Still have to remake the back end, and mess with the other arm.

RE: BlahBlahBlah Swampert WIP - Wavey - 06-28-2009

The eyes are better but I'm just not feeling something. *hehehehe*

Maybe if you made it more like the first in http://img196.imageshack.us/img196/6997/pokemonteaml.png or whatever, and just made the pupil thing a pixel loonger, I'd get a more Swampert feel. I also don't know if you want to or not, but you could make the headfinnies go separate directions (http://pokemon.marriland.com/images/dp/front-n/260-3.png fiucking d/p)

eeDIT: also maybe curve the belly of the beast more, idk (goddamnit dp slap me in the face)

RE: BlahBlahBlah Swampert WIP - Cshad - 06-28-2009

[Image: pokemonteamb.png]

This better ?

RE: BlahBlahBlah Swampert WIP - FRET - 06-28-2009

Eyes look too slanted there.

And belly looks too flat on one part

RE: BlahBlahBlah Swampert WIP - Cshad - 06-28-2009

[Image: pokemonteam.png]

Its looking better, but the face is still bugging me a bit. Thanks fret and wavey.

RE: BlahBlahBlah Swampert WIP - Wavey - 06-28-2009

Def. looks better. I don't know what to do about the face, get JarJar on that lol. Too me it just looks weird that the tailthingy is sticking out so much, but its probably because of the angle you put him at. Left-belly and his right (ourleft) hand is idk. But I really don't know if you'll stretch the restrictions if you change some things there.

idk, but maybe the bellytorso should curve and be skinnier a bit at the top and move the head back a few, unless you don't wanna do that. just don't completely overwrite the sprite if you do this, just wanna see how it works out really (goddamnit d/p :/)

RE: BlahBlahBlah Swampert WIP - LeleleleMAXIMUM - 06-28-2009

Is he doing the split?
Good stuff.

Also, hi Waveytrast.

RE: BlahBlahBlah Swampert WIP - Wavey - 06-28-2009

(06-28-2009, 06:40 PM)Mr. Buttbutt Wrote: Is he doing the split?
Good stuff.

Also, hi Waveytrast.

No, obviously he's scratching his fidnick.

Also hi.

Waiting for the next update :C

RE: BlahBlahBlah Swampert WIP - Cshad - 06-30-2009

[Image: pokemonteam.png]

Thanks for the crit wavey, I tried to apply that while fixing this, as well as messing with a few other things. This looking any better yet?
Going to add the other arm soon, still trying to get everything else out of the way.

RE: BlahBlahBlah Swampert WIP - CeeY - 06-30-2009

Looking great so far. But the shading seems a little jagged on Latias face.

RE: BlahBlahBlah Swampert WIP - Boo - 06-30-2009

Yeah Swampert is looking a lot better, once you complete it, it should look pretty good.