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RE: Mabelma's Thread of Stuff (Art) - Mabelma - 09-27-2012
![[Image: 019__rattata_by_mabelma-d5g6r4z.png]](http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/271/8/6/019__rattata_by_mabelma-d5g6r4z.png)
Jajajaja, way too funny man, jajajaja Btw here's the new rattata
RE: Mabelma's Thread of Stuff (Art) - Marth - 09-27-2012
front limbs seem way too fat. Look at an actual rat, and try and base his anatomy off of that?
RE: Mabelma's Thread of Stuff (Art) - Mabelma - 09-27-2012
Since this is just a doodle I'm happy enough to move forward to another pokemon but thank you for your input.
RE: Mabelma's Thread of Stuff (Art) - Mabelma - 11-06-2012
![[Image: raticate_by_mabelma-d5ka6mc.png]](http://th05.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/f/2012/311/b/0/raticate_by_mabelma-d5ka6mc.png)
Trying to get back into making pokemons, before I fix all the ones I want to fix I want to finish them all. So enjoy my try at going back and posting one or two a day
RE: Mabelma's Thread of Stuff (Art) - Marth - 11-06-2012
I understand it's a warmup but that one looks incredibly flat
RE: Mabelma's Thread of Stuff (Art) - Mabelma - 11-07-2012
Thanks for your input mate, correct me if I'm wrong but most of the flatness is in the front part of the face, right?
RE: Mabelma's Thread of Stuff (Art) - Mabelma - 11-07-2012
![[Image: 021__spearow_by_mabelma-d5kecxj.png]](http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/312/5/8/021__spearow_by_mabelma-d5kecxj.png)
Spearow doing his thing
RE: Mabelma's Thread of Stuff (Art) - Marth - 11-07-2012
Yeah it was because of the front of his face
RE: Mabelma's Thread of Stuff (Art) - Mabelma - 11-09-2012
![[Image: 022__fearow_by_mabelma-d5klmlj.png]](http://th08.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2012/314/2/7/022__fearow_by_mabelma-d5klmlj.png)
Fearow
RE: Mabelma's Thread of Stuff (Art) - Virt - 11-09-2012
his eye
he looks more scared than angry
the top shouldn't connect to the top of the face
RE: Mabelma's Thread of Stuff (Art) - Mabelma - 11-12-2012
Stuff for people.
![[Image: ngbbs509f05527751d.jpg]](http://bbsimg.ngfiles.com/14/24322000/ngbbs509f05527751d.jpg)
![[Image: ngbbs50a02cd020734.jpg]](http://bbsimg.ngfiles.com/14/24324000/ngbbs50a02cd020734.jpg)
![[Image: ngbbs50a18c9120a62.jpg]](http://bbsimg.ngfiles.com/14/24325000/ngbbs50a18c9120a62.jpg)
RE: Mabelma's Thread of Stuff (Art) - Lexou Duck - 11-13-2012
You should try and imagine the pose you're drawing in 3d before actually drawing it, cause most of what you draw atm looks really flat, even with shading.
Also, using lines of actions and force curves to exaggerate your poses would be great.
RE: Mabelma's Thread of Stuff (Art) - Mabelma - 11-23-2012
Trying to improve my shading hopefully I'm doing something right... Also @Lexou do you think you could show me what you mean by lines of actions? Thank you.
![[Image: ngbbs50afdef0e64d4.jpg]](http://bbsimg.ngfiles.com/14/24343000/ngbbs50afdef0e64d4.jpg)
![[Image: ngbbs50afdf594057e.jpg]](http://bbsimg.ngfiles.com/14/24343000/ngbbs50afdf594057e.jpg)
![[Image: ngbbs50afdfec73279.jpg]](http://bbsimg.ngfiles.com/14/24343000/ngbbs50afdfec73279.jpg)
![[Image: ngbbs50afe05aad391.jpg]](http://bbsimg.ngfiles.com/14/24343000/ngbbs50afe05aad391.jpg)
RE: Mabelma's Thread of Stuff (Art) - Lexou Duck - 11-23-2012
here's a quick explanation about lines of action
RE: Mabelma's Thread of Stuff (Art) - Mabelma - 11-27-2012
(11-23-2012, 03:51 PM)Lexou Duck Wrote: here's a quick explanation about lines of action
Thanks mate, this will help a lot with the pokemon project and just overall
2 more characters for people
![[Image: ngbbs50b51505becb4.jpg]](http://bbsimg.ngfiles.com/14/24349000/ngbbs50b51505becb4.jpg)