(01-28-2009, 09:15 PM)AgentLym Wrote: Hm... Torkirby, you may be right. Yo, Baegal, are you making Ado or Adeline? (Ado has no arms, like yours; Adeline has arms. ) Arms won't be that hard to fix, though.

And, A.J. Nitro, looks good! Just his arms look a little like they are being stretched out in the back... But, actually, I think that's just the way the shadow of the arm connects with the black line of the back.

(01-29-2009, 10:52 AM)ville10 Wrote: Guess I should help others by giving criticism too...

@Drshnaps: Both look very good, keep up the good work!

@Simona-King: Good, but he could be fatter, and the light bulb could be better shaped. Is also need to brighter, as if it was shining.

@A.J. Nitro: Shouldn't Big Waddle Dee be bigger, compared to the original sprite, he looks too small. Otherwise it's good.

@Zachattack888: Chip should probably be a bit pointier and he looks a bit small. You also need to move the eyes up a bit.

@Baegal: The eyes look really boring, check Kirby's sprite, the eyes are never just a straight line. The foots also seems to be pointing in the wrong direction compared to the rest of the body.

@Torkirby: Looks good so far, but I think you should remove the gray pixles below the hat and next to the eyes.

@Batandy: The eye needs to be rounder, and it also seems oddly colored. Check the Kirby's Dream Land 3 sprite for a reference. The yellow part could also use some more shading.
Also, shouldn't the rainbow sword be rainbow colored?

(01-29-2009, 08:54 AM)AgentLym Wrote: @ Zach (KK)
Hm... something seems off, but I don't know what. It looks as if an animal is just laying on Kirby's head... But, maybe that's how it's supposed to look!

(01-29-2009, 04:47 PM)ville10 Wrote: @Baegal: Maybe it's just me, but it's seems like the feet are seen to much from the side. I think that at least the right foot should be seen more from the front.
The shading seems pretty good though.
As for the eyes, check other character's eyes too, like Waddle Dee's and Poppy Bro's. They all have different styles, and one of them might work.

@AJ: Ok, I guess you're right. It's just that he is not as big in comparison to the normal Waddle Dee as the one from amazing mirror are. On the other hand, the sizes in Kirby games changes all the time, so it's no big deal.

(01-29-2009, 03:41 PM)ville10 Wrote: Yeah, I know that pillow-shading is usually considered bad, but it was used for Kabu (check this sheet) and as both are cylindrical (well Two Face is a half cylinder) I thought it would work. I asked before what everyone thought about the shading style and nobody said anything.
Whatever, I'll remake it tomorrow, and I'll try to add more frames.

EDIT: I did a quick try to fix it:
Not, the final version, only a test. Better?

(01-29-2009, 08:17 PM)Torkirby Wrote: Progress on Needle Kirby.