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RE: Rapture! The Game. A new sidescroller coming soon. - Gors - 12-06-2012
the skeleton on the top-right corner is almost invisible, save for the skull. I suggest making it readable against any background.
RE: Rapture! The Game. A new sidescroller coming soon. - puggsoy - 12-06-2012
Yeah, I agree. I think just giving him a brighter outline would do the trick, since I don't think he'll be against such a dark background that often.
Also, why the flat RaptureBoy? The first one you showed was pretty good imo.
RE: Rapture! The Game. A new sidescroller coming soon. - Phaze - 12-06-2012
Looking nice!
One thing I'd recommend though is smoothing the edges of the Fauxboy; I notice some 'jaggies' appear on what imo should be relatively flat lines. This is most noticeable on the top.