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RE: TheMario360 (Playable character) (?) - TheMario360 - 06-15-2014
I reorganized my sheet. (All sprites in here are ones that have not been given any further critique)
I'll edit it into the first post
![[Image: TheMario360TFRsheet_zps159d0c5c.png]](http://i1353.photobucket.com/albums/q663/TheMario360/TheMario360TFRsheet_zps159d0c5c.png)
Also, here is the "hit hard" sprite:
![[Image: TheMario360walk1_zpsd91cd3d3.png]](http://i1353.photobucket.com/albums/q663/TheMario360/TheMario360walk1_zpsd91cd3d3.png)
RE: TheMario360 (Playable character) (?) - Iocus - 06-15-2014
(06-15-2014, 05:02 PM)TheMario360 Wrote: I reorganized my sheet. (All sprites in here are ones that have not been given any further critique)
I probably should've mentioned this earlier, but some of your animations kind of seem to ignore joints...namely, the walk and jump animations.
In the former, the arms are entirely stiff, the forearm doesn't move along the elbow at all. In the latter, the problem is more prevalent on the legs, where they are entirely straight and there's knees. The last couple of frames also seem to ignore the pelvis altogether; i.e., the legs are too close too each other (Most probably because you didn't take the back leg's knee into consideration.)
RE: TheMario360 (Playable character) (?) - TheMario360 - 06-15-2014
(06-15-2014, 05:09 PM)Iocus Wrote:(06-15-2014, 05:02 PM)TheMario360 Wrote: I reorganized my sheet. (All sprites in here are ones that have not been given any further critique)
I probably should've mentioned this earlier, but something of your animations kind of seem to ignore joints...namely, the walk and jump animations.
In the former, the arms are entirely stiff, the forearm doesn't move along the elbow at all. In the latter, the problem is more prevalent on the legs, where they are entirely straight and there's knees. The last couple of frames also seem to ignore the pelvis altogether; i.e., the legs are too close too each other (Most probably because you didn't take the back leg's knee into consideration.)
I'll get on that ASAP.
RE: TheMario360 (Playable character) (?) - TheMario360 - 06-22-2016
Would it be to late to continue making sprites for this?
RE: TheMario360 (Playable character) (?) - TheShyGuy - 06-22-2016
Nope, go right ahead.
RE: TheMario360 (Playable character) (?) - TheMario360 - 06-22-2016
(06-22-2016, 11:01 PM)TheShyGuy Wrote: Nope, go right ahead.
Ok, because I was considering revamping my character's design to reflect my new avatar and better art skills. I'll post an example in a bit.
(06-22-2016, 11:17 PM)TheMario360 Wrote:(06-22-2016, 11:01 PM)TheShyGuy Wrote: Nope, go right ahead.
Ok, because I was considering revamping my character's design to reflect my new avatar and better art skills. I'll post an example in a bit.
Here's the example. How is it? To detailed?
![[Image: uGSoTWI.png]](http://i.imgur.com/uGSoTWI.png)
RE: TheMario360 (Playable character) (?) - TheShyGuy - 06-23-2016
It doesn't fit the tFR style well. He's too skinny and the face is too small and cramped. You should check out Sol(Click) for a more humanoid fighter to compare with.
RE: TheMario360 (Playable character) (?) - TheMario360 - 06-23-2016
(06-23-2016, 12:01 AM)TheShyGuy Wrote: It doesn't fit the tFR style well. He's too skinny and the face is too small and cramped. You should check out Sol(Click) for a more humanoid fighter to compare with.
Is this better?
![[Image: eYl3dFE.png]](http://i.imgur.com/eYl3dFE.png)
RE: TheMario360 (Playable character) (?) - TheShyGuy - 06-23-2016
Yeah, but it still needs more work. His perspective and proportions are inconsistent with other fighters. Also, the stance isn't interesting which is more of a perspective and anatomy problem. I apologize for the crit not being very detailed, it's been a while since I've given criticism for pixel art or have done anything artistic.
RE: TheMario360 (Playable character) (?) - TheMario360 - 06-23-2016
This feels like it's creeping into plagiarism territory, but, how's this?
![[Image: WZPmrRp.png]](http://i.imgur.com/WZPmrRp.png)
RE: TheMario360 (Playable character) (?) - TheShyGuy - 06-23-2016
Hehe I guess you just gotta hope that Gors doesn't care. I think it's fine to use other fighters as a base. That's what consistency is, right?- making everyone look like they fit.
It's look a lot better, but he lacks interest and personality. Right now, he's a kid with glasses, a white shirt and blue pants. You may want to exaggerate his features (big glasses and hair, like your avatar) so his face is easier to read and he's more interesting to look at.
RE: TheMario360 (Playable character) (?) - TheMario360 - 06-23-2016
![[Image: BmdTXGl.png]](http://i.imgur.com/BmdTXGl.png)
RE: TheMario360 (Playable character) (?) - TheShyGuy - 06-23-2016
Cross-eyed
![[Image: 2k2z0Zx.png]](http://i.imgur.com/2k2z0Zx.png)
I brightened some colors due to lack of contrast with the hair and pants.
Maybe consider removing the nose or make it more readable?
(Also I didn't realize just how closely you copied the pose lol. You're lucky Gors left)
RE: TheMario360 (Playable character) (?) - TheMario360 - 06-23-2016
I made some tweaks to your design.
![[Image: 8oVVbq4.png]](http://i.imgur.com/8oVVbq4.png)
(It's a shame Gors left, but, life does come first.)
RE: TheMario360 (Playable character) (?) - TheShyGuy - 06-23-2016
That should be a sufficient base to start animating with. As I told Smithy, if you have any questions about what kind of animation and moves I can support, just ask.