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RE: TUGS - Round 1 - Intermediate WIP Thread - Chris2Balls [:B] - 09-09-2010

I'm changing my design. Trying to get out of my comfort zone :I
[Image: tugsr1v4.png]
Yeah, water, and working on a nice, saturated palette.


RE: TUGS - Round 1 - Intermediate WIP Thread - Gors - 09-09-2010

scrapped the whole aurora, will start it over

[Image: 10fp4xt.png]


RE: TUGS - Round 1 - Intermediate WIP Thread - Rosencrantz - 09-09-2010

JUST WHEN YOU THOUGHT I WAS BITCHING MY WAY OUT OF THIS

[Image: RedeemMe.png]

blamo




I'm fairly certain I just broke about four of my comfort zones while doing this



and I'm not sure how I want to shade the dark parts of the clouds so I left it as is until I get some crits on this~

really, I was aiming for something a bit more abstract; I think I nailed this.
Also my dithering job didn't suck this time!!! I'm actually really happy about this~
also 101 32 11 colors. I can probably trim down the number of colors a little more, but I was aiming for 11~

*hopefully* I can submit the final piece by tomorrow. I just need to extend the thing vertically since it's about two pixels short of the minimum, but besides that I just want to get some comments and crits before I can finally say "I'm done"


RE: TUGS - Round 1 - Intermediate WIP Thread - Alpha Six - 09-09-2010

There are some serious readability issues going on in here.


RE: TUGS - Round 1 - Intermediate WIP Thread - Rosencrantz - 09-09-2010

Yeah, that was actually one of the things I was having difficulty with

I'm going to play around with it a bit more and try to make everything a bit easier to see. But I'm not sure if it's just the palette itself or if I need to redraw or at least reshade most of it :/

I'll probably do both anyway, haha

but I'll try to fix it all up before I submit it


RE: TUGS - Round 1 - Intermediate WIP Thread - Vic - 09-09-2010

it's those weird star thingies that cause most of the readability issues
they're all over the place and I honestly have no idea what purpose they serve right now.


RE: TUGS - Round 1 - Intermediate WIP Thread - Rosencrantz - 09-09-2010

They were meant to be people
but apparently I didn't pull that off properly if that wasn't obvious !!

Oh well; I'll scrap that, since they didn't turn out the way I wanted them to : (


RE: TUGS - Round 1 - Intermediate WIP Thread - Ninspriterx - 09-09-2010

Here's my simpler one [Image: entry2w.png]
I still don't have the energy for this.


RE: TUGS - Round 1 - Intermediate WIP Thread - Solink - 09-09-2010

~Hello gentlemen!~
[Image: tugsround1wip1.png]
Still WIP obliviously
I'm quite happy of this so far :]


RE: TUGS - Round 1 - Intermediate WIP Thread - GaryASPG - 09-10-2010

[Image: pyramidremastered.png]

started over. or not. i dont even know anymore.


RE: TUGS - Round 1 - Intermediate WIP Thread - DadNier - 09-10-2010

that looks a lot better than the one I saw on skype; the teal outline and brigher colors on the foreground draw your eye to it and it creates a more interesting contrast between foreground and background


RE: TUGS - Round 1 - Intermediate WIP Thread - GrooveMan.exe - 09-10-2010

(09-09-2010, 08:49 PM)Rosencrantz Wrote: They were meant to be people
but apparently I didn't pull that off properly if that wasn't obvious !!

Oh well; I'll scrap that, since they didn't turn out the way I wanted them to : (

Actually it's pretty clear that they're people imo. It's just that there are a few too many, and too many abstract blobs in between. Maybe make the stars that aren't people a darker shade, so they don't stand out as mucvh.


RE: TUGS - Round 1 - Intermediate WIP Thread - Gors - 09-10-2010

[Image: 152i8u9.png]

testing
[Image: w8p0kg.png]In case I'm not happy with the aurora yet


RE: TUGS - Round 1 - Intermediate WIP Thread - Badassbill - 09-10-2010

Nice technique, but the original still works better.


RE: TUGS - Round 1 - Intermediate WIP Thread - Gors - 09-10-2010

I'll try fusing this technique with the older, then

I like the visual effect of this one and the wavyness of the first