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RE: Ah! So you do keep a journal! - triptych - 04-25-2009

alright

not sure who im going to do after ewen but i know i want to get one more in here just because i dont like the number 7
[Image: ffta2group.png]

edit:
[Image: ffta2groupf.png]
GRANDMA WHAT A BIG




TURBAN YOU HAVE


RE: Ah! So you do keep a journal! - Emma - 04-25-2009

dsgkjhfgkh i Heart penelo. so much.

but aren't her trousers, y'know... baggier than that? they kinda poof out.


RE: Ah! So you do keep a journal! - triptych - 04-25-2009

not in 1up world they dont

they look exactly like that









exactly
seriously though i could have made them bigger

i probably will later


RE: Ah! So you do keep a journal! - Chris2Balls [:B] - 04-25-2009

Looking good
Alcid's right thigh (our left) seems too far out, and makes it look like he has a wide pelvis, which makes him look effeminate. I think you should move his thigh in a bit. His legs seem to hint that he is leaning on the left leg, but when you take in count the torso, it seems like it is the right. I think you want to convey an element of stability/aplomb to this character, so it is essential that you make him stable.


RE: Ah! So you do keep a journal! - triptych - 04-25-2009

y/n
[Image: ffta2groupo.png]


RE: Ah! So you do keep a journal! - Chris2Balls [:B] - 04-25-2009

That's already better.


RE: Ah! So you do keep a journal! - triptych - 04-25-2009

[Image: ffta2groupi.png]
decided messing with ewen's palette and now i can't decide which one to use






help

me


RE: Ah! So you do keep a journal! - mozzy - 04-25-2009

I think the one on the left works better.


RE: Ah! So you do keep a journal! - Solink - 04-25-2009

the first one is better IMO


RE: Ah! So you do keep a journal! - Kaj - 04-26-2009

First one has better contrast and matches the style's vividness a bit more I think.


RE: Ah! So you do keep a journal! - Gors - 04-26-2009

I don't know, but the new character (Ewen?) looks awfully off-balance. It looks all twisted and unnatural. Also, you could make their facial features more noticeable.


RE: Ah! So you do keep a journal! - Kaj - 04-26-2009

I'm not sure, but I think he's supposed to leaning against an invisible wall.


RE: Ah! So you do keep a journal! - Clear - 04-27-2009

like nice stuff 1up, you've sure gotten pretty good over time


RE: Ah! So you do keep a journal! - Mecha - 04-29-2009

wait people said my legs looked like yours?! I WISH Very Sad Your style is awesome!