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RE: The 1 Month, nothing to do Mabelma's Project - Goemar - 03-22-2009

In short: Everything.
Long version: Shading is really bad, look at jeans - they don't look like that... Shading is so bad it makes the line art quite hard to see - I just don't like it.


RE: The 1 Month, nothing to do Mabelma's Project - Mabelma - 03-23-2009

I tried fixing some more things from M. Jeans tell me what to fix. [Image: MisterJeans-1.png]
Some of the highlights are clorox marks like the ones at the middle of the sprite.


RE: The 1 Month, nothing to do Mabelma's Project - Goemar - 03-23-2009

The outline is a big jaggy and they look like something from the 70s - don't know if that's your intent.


RE: The 1 Month, nothing to do Mabelma's Project - Mabelma - 03-23-2009

Yeah that's what I wanted it too look like. Is the shading good?


RE: The 1 Month, nothing to do Mabelma's Project - Goemar - 03-23-2009

The creases look highly odd, I would look at them a lot closer. Use anime as a reference, and see how the clothes crease etc.
Some nasty person also jizzed on them.


RE: The 1 Month, nothing to do Mabelma's Project - Mabelma - 03-23-2009

Thanks but what is jizzed and what is creases?


RE: The 1 Month, nothing to do Mabelma's Project - Goemar - 03-23-2009

Creases - none straight bits, you know, folds in the fabric etc.
Jizz is stuff that comes out of males when they are happy - google it.


RE: The 1 Month, nothing to do Mabelma's Project - Mabelma - 03-23-2009

Oh that's what you mean. LOL. I'll fix it. What's wrong with teh folds?


RE: The 1 Month, nothing to do Mabelma's Project - Goemar - 03-23-2009

To get folds like that someone would have to carefully do them by hands, they don't look natural.


RE: The 1 Month, nothing to do Mabelma's Project - Bear Saxaphone - 03-23-2009

(03-23-2009, 04:00 PM)Mabelma Wrote: Oh that's what you mean. LOL. I'll fix it. What's wrong with teh folds?

Whats wrong is that teh isn't a word, they need to be renamed the folds. They look way to jagged.


RE: The 1 Month, nothing to do Mabelma's Project - Mabelma - 03-23-2009

How can I make them look more natural Goemar? You know what I meant Paris.


RE: The 1 Month, nothing to do Mabelma's Project - Goemar - 03-23-2009

Look at real jeans. Simple.


RE: The 1 Month, nothing to do Mabelma's Project - Mabelma - 03-23-2009

OK I'll do that for tomorrow.I'm learning to 3d model.


RE: The 1 Month, nothing to do Mabelma's Project - Mabelma - 03-24-2009

Ok so Goemar I just put on a pair of jeans and noticed the folds. I'll make it look like that. I can't do anything right. Sorry. I'll post two things tomorrow.


RE: The 1 Month, nothing to do Mabelma's Project - Mabelma - 03-25-2009

Here's are the new things:
[Image: MisterJeans-2.png]
[Image: Cap.png]
C+C please!