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Pokemon Mytery Dungeon: Legend of the Sky - The Jinzo Dude - 06-25-2008
(Okay, this is going to be a sprite comic, but until I acquire all needed Pokemon and backgrounds, just enjoy the fanfic)
(Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Legend of the Sky, and its sequel, Legend of the Sea, contains some mature language and is not recommended for viewers under 13 years of age... Oh, who am I kidding, nobody actually reads this crap, anyway)
Chapter 0: The Pilot, Part I
???: Welcome! This is the portal that leads into the world of Pokemon! Beyond this gateway, many...
Hero: *snoring*
???: ...Hello..? Hey. Uh...
Hero: *continues snoring*
???: HEY! WAKE UP, DAMMIT!!!
Hero: WHAA?! *scratches head* Ugh! You don't have to be so freakin' loud..!
???: Whatever... Anyway, let's just get on to the questions...
(After answering a series of eight questions and having the hero's aura analyzed, the Pokemon that our hero will take role as is soon to be revealed...)
???: You seem to be...the brave type! You don't know the meaning of fear! You're not afraid to keep moving forward in the face of danger. You also have a strong sense of justice and can't turn a blind eye to someone in trouble. But you sometimes push your own personal sense of justice a little too hard. Be careful that you don't get too pushy! So, a brave type like you... Will be a Pikachu!
Hero: Pikachu?! Pikachu sucks! I wanna Riolu!
???: WHAT?! You can't atart out as a Riolu in this game*!
Hero: Hmph! Can't start out as a Riolu, huh? BULL CRAP! Bull crap, I say! You're the one who's turning into the damn Pokemon in the first place! You can give me anything I freakin' WANT!
???: Uh...
Hero: IWANNARIOLUIWANNARIOLUIWANNARIOLUIWANNARIOLU--
???: ALL RIGHT YOU CAN BE A RIOLU JUST SHUT UP ALREADY!!!
Hero: WOO-HOO!!! RIOLU!
???: ...Dumbass...
*Well, technically, it's a fanfic, and it's really supposed to be a comic, but "game" just sounds better than either one, don't ya think?
So anyway, this is part one of the pilot chapter, just one more, then the real story will start! I'll try to make things MUCH longer than this one, but C0PII will still be a bit short.
And please, God. Give me the concentration to stick with this one. I'll try my hardest to at least finish Phase 1!
Other Notes:
The brave outcome was ripped from the direct lines of PMD2. Credit to redblueyellow for the Nature Test I was using to do so!
You pretty much would fall asleep if you actually had to listen to that opening speech instead of being able to skip through it, wouldn't you?
Since the hero was (going to be) a Pikachu because of a brave nature, that pretty much makes it obvious that he's a male.
Come to think of it, Riolu could've very well been a possible starter, couldn't it? It would've been a perfect replacement for Machop...
RE: Pokemon Mytery Dungeon: Legend of the Sky - redblueyellow - 06-25-2008
This is the first fanfic that I have read so far, and it seems really good. I was kind of confused of why it is called the pilot, but it is still good. Also, if there are any specific sprites/backgrounds that you want me to rip for your fanfic/game, just ask and I'll try to get to it as soon as I can.
RE: Pokemon Mytery Dungeon: Legend of the Sky - The Jinzo Dude - 06-26-2008
Well, before I can even START I'll need the forest scene from the *coughcough* original PMD game. I'll also need the full Riolu family sheet. The one that's already on tSR is missing some poses. I'm also in need of Sharpedo, but he won't appear until the sequel. There are many others, but I can't think of them right now.
Also, a pilot is kind of like the starting point/prologue of the story about to be told
BUT ANYWAY...
Here's part 2!
Chapter 0: The Pilot, Part II
???: Alright! Now, before you're sent into the Pokemon world, you must choose a partner to stand by your side.
Hero: Hmmm... *looks over roster* I want... Pikachu!
???: WHAT?! I thought you said Pikachu sucks!
Hero: Oh, that. What I meant was, Pikachu sucks as a starter, but as a buddy, he's pretty awesome.
???: ...Just...freaking...go...
Hero: WAAAH!!! *warped*
???: Ugh! My aching head... *goes for a cup of coffee*
Notes:
Damn. This was shorter than I expected. Notes are, too. Probably the shortest ever! No references/notices here, folks!
RE: Pokemon Mytery Dungeon: Legend of the Sky - Zee - 06-26-2008
This is.... awful. But around here you're only likely to get ass-pats or flaming. If you want to learn actual quality, go to Serebii's forums and post it there, they'll actually help you improve.
RE: Pokemon Mytery Dungeon: Legend of the Sky - theguy - 06-26-2008
The way you are writing makes everybody seem pretentious.