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I want to get better, so critic me! - Darking - 12-28-2009 As some of you know, I'm a spriter. But really, I'm not very good. So I made a sprite just for you critic it and help me. C+C please. RE: I want to get better, so critic me! - Chris2Balls [:B] - 12-28-2009 The AA isn't that good, and the shading on the left doesn't seem right when you see the lightsource, and the mushroom shape isn't consistent. But this is a good shot! RE: I want to get better, so critic me! - DioShiba - 12-28-2009 Going to agree with Chris2balls about the Anti-Aliasing on this Also the black outline looks like it's being a bit over used, this kind of makes the sprite a bit bland on this. (Unless this is how you were intending it to look) but overall it's pretty good. RE: I want to get better, so critic me! - Gors - 12-28-2009 this looks good, but the sel-out kills it for me.