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crits plz (now contains zelda) - Shiraku - 03-19-2010
I was working on these enemy sprites a while ago and realized I need a little guidance and critiquing while I'm still at an early stage.
![[Image: sheett.png]](http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/5039/sheett.png)
RE: crits plz - Dave - 03-19-2010
nice shading, you got the basic idea
RE: crits plz - Medevenx - 03-19-2010
Change the color of the background.
RE: crits plz - Cobalt Blue - 03-20-2010
explain us what are we looking at.
RE: crits plz - Shiraku - 03-20-2010
(03-20-2010, 12:06 AM)Francisco Cifuentes Wrote: explain us what are we looking at.
Enemy sprites for a turn based battle system, like Final Fantasy. That particular image though is what I was working on when I decided to ask for crits, so I didn't bother to arrange anything. The general theme I was going for is using only those shades of beige, since they're from a game that's based on a comic in which the main color used is beige.
Also, I just updated the image with new sprites.
RE: crits plz - Cobalt Blue - 03-20-2010
are these suposed to be animated? because it seems the idea was to use still images.
RE: crits plz - Shiraku - 03-20-2010
(03-20-2010, 07:34 PM)Francisco Cifuentes Wrote: are these suposed to be animated? because it seems the idea was to use still images.
No, they aren't meant to be animated.
RE: crits plz - Kelvin - 03-20-2010
Certainly an interesting style. This for an original game?
RE: crits plz - Shiraku - 03-20-2010
(03-20-2010, 08:58 PM)Midi Wrote: Certainly an interesting style. This for an original game?
Yeah, an RPG based on a comic-like thing I was doing a few weeks/months ago.
RE: crits plz - Kelvin - 03-20-2010
(03-20-2010, 09:00 PM)Shiraku Wrote:(03-20-2010, 08:58 PM)Midi Wrote: Certainly an interesting style. This for an original game?
Yeah, an RPG based on a comic-like thing I was doing a few weeks/months ago.
Ooh! Can't wait to play the demo!
RE: crits plz - Cobalt Blue - 03-21-2010
if these are meant to look as if they were drawn on paper, i'd suggest using thicker outlines to make the characters stand out a bit more.
RE: crits plz - Shiraku - 04-03-2010
(03-21-2010, 10:11 AM)Francisco Cifuentes Wrote: if these are meant to look as if they were drawn on paper, i'd suggest using thicker outlines to make the characters stand out a bit more.
![[Image: sheetti.png]](http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/7614/sheetti.png)
I'm not sure about the thicker outlines, but I tried a few variations. It's not really supposed to look like it's drawn on paper, it's just that the thing these sprites are based on used one color for almost everything.
RE: crits plz - Shiraku - 04-10-2010
So I guess they're alright as they are??? I dunno! ))):
RE: crits plz - Cobalt Blue - 04-10-2010
show us a mockup.
RE: crits plz - Iceman404 - 04-10-2010
You could put alot of creativity into this by making the game/world/style a drawing book.
Like, say, using notebook paper for battle backgrounds.