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Lineart-fixing help. - GrooveMan.exe - 05-01-2010 Because I still suck at spriting. I'm trying to do an RPG-ish sprite of a friend for his birthday, and even though I've found working on this really frustrating, I think I've made okay-ish progress. But the feet keep coming out wrong every time I try, and hands are just plain beyond me. While I can shade and colour this myself, could someone have a go at neatening up the lineart and add/finish the hands and feet? It would be such a great help. RE: Lineart-fixing help. - Cobalt Blue - 05-01-2010 groove just put this on sprite discussion :V RE: Lineart-fixing help. - GrooveMan.exe - 05-01-2010 Because I don't really need this critiqued (I know it's terrible). I just need it fixed because it's frustrating the fuck out of me. RE: Lineart-fixing help. - Maneko - 05-01-2010 If anything, the hip area looks a bit off, considering it's supposed to belong to an overweight character. I don't know, the space between the legs looks a bit too empty and wide IMO. RE: Lineart-fixing help. - GrooveMan.exe - 05-08-2010 While not dismissing your suggestion, I'm not entirely sure the crotch would be lower than that. The coat obviously hangs below the waistline. Also bumping this in the vain hope of assistance. Tyvon said he would - he's ditched me again. :I RE: Lineart-fixing help. - Lexou Duck - 05-08-2010 His arms are really off. Kinda fat and round. RE: Lineart-fixing help. - GrooveMan.exe - 05-08-2010 I'm not going to disagree, but I don't exactly follow what you mean. Considering the person in question is bulky, thinner arms would look considerably stranger. RE: Lineart-fixing help. - Maneko - 05-08-2010 I didn't said the crotch area should be lower, I said that it had a lot of empty space, which is not supposed to happen on fat people. Take a look at these fat Pokémon trainer battle sprites and you will see what I'm talking about the pelvic area. RE: Lineart-fixing help. - GrooveMan.exe - 05-08-2010 Ok, that's considerably clearer. I can adjust that. I think. RE: Lineart-fixing help. - Lexou Duck - 05-08-2010 Well, I edited what bothered me. This is what you're gonna want the hands to look like. RE: Lineart-fixing help. - GrooveMan.exe - 05-08-2010 That actually feels a lot better. That left hand is... harder to follow than the other, but I get what you mean. Unless anyone else has a better version than that in mind, I'll work from this one, thanks. =) RE: Lineart-fixing help. - Lexou Duck - 05-09-2010 You're welcome. Wasn't much.