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More or less finished - Chris2Balls [:B] - 05-30-2010
I fused my two characters:
![[Image: c2bed.png]](http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/6192/c2bed.png)
This is an edited splice, each bit taken from one of my sprites though (resized, erased and kept outline and reshaded etc).
What do you think? Anything you like/ don't like design-wise? Edits would be deeply appreciated
RE: More or less finished - CeeY - 05-30-2010
Hip, but Id like more contrast.
RE: More or less finished - Lexou Duck - 05-30-2010
The dithering on the pants looks wierd.
And what's up with his arms ?
RE: More or less finished - Chris2Balls [:B] - 05-30-2010
Dithering's to convey textile and introduces a gradient in the trousers, did some dithering on the jacket for the former purpose, but not on the shoulders for readability. I made the contrast a bit higher (not much), but I wanted to keep a distance between the black and the shading.
![[Image: c2bed.png]](http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/6192/c2bed.png)
He's supposed to be keeping one hand against his left headphone, and the black thing's his dense arm hair.
RE: More or less finished - Lexou Duck - 05-30-2010
Oh, ok.
You might wanna redo that gradient, it doesn't add up.
RE: More or less finished - Cobalt Blue - 05-30-2010
these arms need a serious increase of mass and volume. unless they're suposed to be made of sticks.
also the neck looks extremely flat.
RE: More or less finished - Chris2Balls [:B] - 05-30-2010
I basically wanted the dithered colour on one leg and the pink on another. I changed the dithering a tiny bit, if you could tell me what is precisely wrong I'll try work on it. I've added a portrait I'll shade next weekend:
![[Image: c2bed.png]](http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/6192/c2bed.png)
Okay Tyvon, I'll see what I can do about them.
RE: More or less finished - Cobalt Blue - 05-30-2010
fuck i said i'm not tyvon wearing a wig
the dithering makes the pants look as if they were made up of fishnet
you might as well use a solid colors based gradient-
RE: More or less finished - Chris2Balls [:B] - 05-30-2010
![[Image: c2bed.png]](http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/6192/c2bed.png)
Any better?
RE: More or less finished - Super Mario - 05-30-2010
(05-30-2010, 04:43 PM)Chris2Balls [:B] Wrote:
Any better?
Oh baby that's so sexy
RE: More or less finished - CeeY - 05-30-2010
Keep the texture gradient on the jacket, but It also looks like you have a small amount of banding on the neck.
RE: More or less finished - Chris2Balls [:B] - 05-30-2010
![[Image: c2bed.png]](http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/6192/c2bed.png)
Better? Or were you thinking of his adam's apple?
RE: More or less finished - Cobalt Blue - 05-30-2010
i dont believe it needs all that amount of anti aliasing at all on his body.
the pants looks way more defined than the torso for the same reason.
RE: More or less finished - Chris2Balls [:B] - 05-30-2010
![[Image: c2bed.png]](http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/6192/c2bed.png)
I reduced the AA, I tried without and didn't like it.
EDIT: ugh, it looks jaggy but its late so i'm calling it a day. Feel free to edit it.
RE: More or less finished - CeeY - 05-30-2010
(05-30-2010, 05:59 PM)Chris2Balls [:B] Wrote:Adam's apple, area around middle of the neck.
Better? Or were you thinking of his adam's apple?