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[WIP] Mr. Saturn (Needs Work) - PJAMA - 10-04-2010 Meh, I don't think they're ready yet. Comments on how to make it better? RE: [WIP] Mr. Saturn (Needs Work) - Iceman404 - 10-04-2010 (The Credit/Info tag is literally larger than the sprites.) RE: [WIP] Mr. Saturn (Needs Work) - Cobalt Blue - 10-04-2010 you dont need to add such a huge label to remark that it is a work in progress. but as far as criticism goes, you need to shade these properly. even when saturns are literally a ball with a huge nose, pillowshading them its not teh way to go. RE: [WIP] Mr. Saturn (Needs Work) - BobbyLala - 10-05-2010 the colours seem very dull and should be peach-ier he is missing his eyebrows which are essential for portraying his character the line-art for his nose is not very good. it should be more circular the feet should be more rounded, they currently look too sharp fix these things and you'll be good to go!