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TTL N3RD 4 U - EF-WHY-EL - 12-16-2010

I got LSDJ the other day and made a little tune. This tune isn't great but i'm only just starting out on this software/hardware.
I was getting a bit sick of milkytracker, mainly because I wasn't getting the right sounds I wanted and the making a groove or shuffle on lsdj is easier etc

Criticism would be good or tips would be great.

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RE: TTL N3RD 4 U - Lexou Duck - 12-16-2010

(12-16-2010, 05:27 AM)EF-WHY-EL Wrote: Criticism would be good
(12-16-2010, 05:27 AM)EF-WHY-EL Wrote: tips would be great.

what

RE: TTL N3RD 4 U - Proton - 12-16-2010

(12-16-2010, 05:59 AM)Lexou Wrote:
(12-16-2010, 05:27 AM)EF-WHY-EL Wrote: Criticism would be good
(12-16-2010, 05:27 AM)EF-WHY-EL Wrote: tips would be great.

what
Tips, as in, little hints as to how to continue with music or how to make it better,
and crit,
as in, what's wrong, what needs to be fixed and what needs more goodnesses.


RE: TTL N3RD 4 U - DioShiba - 12-16-2010

I'll pretend lexou was being sarcastic.

Anyways, I would like this more if it wasn't a mixture of raster graphics and vectors, to be honest.

RE: TTL N3RD 4 U - Lexou Duck - 12-17-2010

Actually, I just wanted to point out that criticism is just as good as tips; No more, no less.

RE: TTL N3RD 4 U - Chutzpar - 12-17-2010

Side-eying at this thread.

It's pretty pointless picking at how they phrased their post when they want concrit on their music. :I

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The song is cute! I think maybe it's a bit too bassy though; the two basslines are sort of overpowering the melody for me a bit. Can you make them quieter, or maybe make one of them a bit higher so it's less heavy?


RE: TTL N3RD 4 U - EF-WHY-EL - 01-23-2011

(12-17-2010, 12:48 PM)Tachikoma Wrote: Side-eying at this thread.

It's pretty pointless picking at how they phrased their post when they want concrit on their music. :I

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The song is cute! I think maybe it's a bit too bassy though; the two basslines are sort of overpowering the melody for me a bit. Can you make them quieter, or maybe make one of them a bit higher so it's less heavy?

I dunno if this will count as a necropost or whatever but I haven't been on in a long time.

I would done exactly that if I hadn't gone and accidentally saved over that song file Sad Listening back to it the bass does pull you away from the melody a fair bit.

Anyways, I have been practicing a bit more recently and have another song to put up.

Same again, crit is always welcome.

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Just to add. I love how many people asked about the "crit or tip" thing...
That was pretty much me not thinking.

RE: TTL N3RD 4 U - Gwen - 01-23-2011

Not going to lie, I almost hoped I was going to hear outrageously awesome black metal chiptune when I clicked on that.
I still liked the song a lot though Tongue

RE: TTL N3RD 4 U - EF-WHY-EL - 01-23-2011

Haha, I think i'm going to have to give this black metal chiptune a go. It would be hilariously entertaining!
Glad you liked what you heard. It's most definitely the polar opposite of black metal haha
Smile

RE: TTL N3RD 4 U - LaDestitute - 01-26-2011

Big Grin I like it very much.
Very retroy, very Earthbound=ish.

RE: TTL N3RD 4 U - EF-WHY-EL - 02-02-2011

Thanks Big Grin I'm happy you enjoyed it.
It's funny you said earthbound-ish because I really wanna cover Twinkle Elementary from earthbound or mother haha, i dunno if they're the same thing or not.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I9MS-Sq7Sow
I first heard this tune in the credits of gameboy camera.