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I came here to get crit - Cassowary - 04-15-2011

[Image: 25akwti.jpg]

For this sprite I will not/cannot use AA. Some crit as to how to improve it and make it more realistic would be nice, though.

RE: I came here to get crit - Medevenx - 04-15-2011

Why are you dithering and using so many colors? I think you have forgotten the purpose of dithering is to acquire midtones with using few colors. Anyway, you are too many straight lines in what appears to be the large worm.

RE: I came here to get crit - Cassowary - 04-15-2011

Dude, there's like, 7 colors. Strong shadow, weak shadow, base, weak highlight, strong highlight, shiny highlight, and dark outline. And dithering can be used for a textural effect as well. I agree on the straightlines but can't think of a way to fix it without changing the position. Suggestions?

I suppose I should've mentioned that this is somewhat based off the Mongolian Deathworm.

Hm, I feel like this response was rather snippy. To elaborate, colorcount doesn't matter too much and is currently low enough.

RE: I came here to get crit - Medevenx - 04-15-2011

But 7 colors for a single sprite with a single color scheme is a bit too much don't you think? A lot of your colors don't really have much contrast either. If you really want to have a great sprite, you should start with the lineart. Because there are a lot of jagged lines in your sprite right now.

RE: I came here to get crit - Phantom Killah - 04-15-2011

(04-15-2011, 10:33 PM)Cassowary Wrote: I suppose I should've mentioned that this is somewhat based off the Mongolian Deathworm.

really? It looks like an earthworm..

Earthworms are pretty smooth, so I don't understand the need for dithering to create texture.


RE: I came here to get crit - Cassowary - 04-15-2011

Perhaps; I have a horrid time with contrast/my monitor hates me so I'll try something, up the contrast and replace a few things. Don't want it to look too rough though. And I can't make the lines any less jagged since I am not using AA.

Based off of, but not entirely mirroring it. Hence some texture. I wanted an earthworm-like body shape but a somewhat drier and more textured exterior (slimy bodies wouldn't work in a desert).

RE: I came here to get crit - DioShiba - 04-17-2011

as far as basing this off a mongolian deathworm, I think it would be a wise idea to use a reference. I feel it should be brought up because of reasons already mentioned.

to be perfectly honest I would suggest restarting and using one, but I think it's far too early to do that.

RE: I came here to get crit - Chris2Balls [:B] - 04-18-2011

i think this piece could do with different shading: for the big worm, the highlight/mid tone/dark tone layout is boring and destroys any sense of volume. a stronger value for the highlight would already give a better idea of volume.

please continue!

RE: I came here to get crit - Cassowary - 04-24-2011

[Image: 10p4zyd.jpg]

Any better? I couldn't find a satisfactory way to cut down on the colors without losing some of the effects I wanted. So sue me I'm not talented enough :B

Also... Very Sad The mongolian deathworm's a cryptid, there's no "reference" for it.

RE: I came here to get crit - DioShiba - 04-24-2011

(04-24-2011, 07:47 PM)Cassowary Wrote: Also... Very Sad The mongolian deathworm's a cryptid, there's no "reference" for it.

Doesn't meant you can't go by certain drawings about what it's assumed to look like. Hell you could probably use this for a decent reference.

RE: I came here to get crit - Cassowary - 04-24-2011

Hm... nevertheless it's my own creation and I'm fairly comfortable with the design currently. But thank you.

RE: I came here to get crit - Koopaul - 04-24-2011

This is just my opinion but I think it looks nicer without the dither. Look.

[Image: nodither.png]

RE: I came here to get crit - Cassowary - 04-25-2011

It does, thank you :)