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Kirby Comic - ElectroMan - 08-11-2008
![[Image: comic1eo8.png]](http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/3636/comic1eo8.png)
It's actually something that I've done long time, so the quality is "meh".
Don't worry, later comics get better. Hope you like them. Updated whenever
RE: Kirby Comic - Comix - 08-11-2008
Is it supposed to be funny?
RE: Kirby Comic - Jelda - 08-11-2008
I don't get it.
RE: Kirby Comic - GoldenX - 08-12-2008
Things to improve:
Needs more humour
Get better fonts from here: http://www.blambot.com/fonts.shtml (the one you're using is too bland) I recommend "Acme Secret Agent" for comics (It's available on the website mentioned in my post.)
RE: Kirby Comic - Rakia - 08-12-2008
Comics are supposed to have a punchline.
Also coloured text boxes =X
RE: Kirby Comic - Chdonga - 08-12-2008
It was fairly laughable... it could be better. I like the colored, shaded text boxes though.
RE: Kirby Comic - Zee - 08-12-2008
Typos, no punchline, colored font, and a lack of effort put into it.
Frankly why do people post comics that they know aren't good with the promise that they'll get better? Frankly, it just smacks of a worthless use of time.
On another note, Chdonga... do you try to fly in the face of popular opinion or is your ass-patting an attempt to raise that rep of yours?
RE: Kirby Comic - ElectroMan - 08-13-2008
lol. I wasn't very funny at the time. Sorry for wasting everybodies time...
However, if you want to see the rest, I am hosting my comic here
If I have time I will improve the old ones... again, sorry for bothering you
RE: Kirby Comic - PrettyNier - 08-16-2008
but
none of them are funny
RE: Kirby Comic - Maxpphire - 08-16-2008
That and eating Mentos and Coke won't explode your stomach. You'll throw up soda foam however so it is perfectly safe to eat and drink that but you'll make a mess of yourself.
RE: Kirby Comic - ElectroMan - 08-17-2008
Well, actually someone died drinking Soda and Mentos. It came on the news and everything
RE: Kirby Comic - Maxpphire - 08-17-2008
He must have had some of the mentos stuck in his throat or something. Otherwise you'd just throw up foam. Something had to have cause his esophagus to be closed otherwise that pressure would just come up.
My science teacher did it in the room once to prove some kid wrong who said that and he just threw up foam.
RE: Kirby Comic - Alpha Six - 08-17-2008
that's
retarded
RE: Kirby Comic - Maxpphire - 08-18-2008
My school teachers are special.
It was good in a way that he didn't have to do any work for the rest of class too however he finally stopped with the foam after a minute or so. It didn't last too long but we had a discussion afterwards on why that happens.
RE: Kirby Comic - ElectroMan - 08-18-2008
(08-17-2008, 05:30 AM)xTYVONx Wrote: that's retarded
OK! I know you all think it sux! Instead of posting hate posts, give me tips!
I already have the comic fonts and I am keeping the speech bubbles. More advice??